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Under the pale pink rose trellis Rose blossoms rained down The scent is awesome from petals There upon the ground There is a new neighbor On this country road For I saw him check out Cedar cabin abode Mockingbird did not like him And tried to chase him away Never heard such chirping As the two did display

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Jack Horne

Date: 9/12/2017 12:11:00 PM

love picturing this

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/8/2017 3:46:00 AM

Yes, this is a magnificent write my friend! I really enjoyed reading your delightful and heartfelt poem here this morning! You have enthralled me to the highest by your kind words of wisdom and your amazing skill at this form! What a fun piece this one is, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/8/2017 6:40:00 AM

Russell, Thanks for dropping by..I guess you are in recuperation time..Not fun having back problems..I hope that the healing is swift and that you are back up and going soon..Sara

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/7/2017 6:29:00 PM

Well, we know how the mockingbirds felt. I wonder who's the neighbor.... Enjoyed your poem...Have a good night

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/7/2017 6:37:00 PM

Arturo, Just keep on guessing who that neighbor might be..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your presence is uplifting..Sara