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“You think you’re more important Than you are,” my husband said, Responding to a sadness that was Floating in my head. “Most people simply do not care If you’re around or not. It doesn’t matter if you give As much as you have got.” I started to object but then I couldn’t disagree. “Who reads your poems” he asked. I said, “I write them just for me.” “And yet you post them. Do you get Much feedback from your friends?” “I do at times,” I answered. “But not often – it depends.” Of course, we all get wrapped up In our lives and don’t have time To reach out to our kith and kin For updates or for rhyme. I understood his point but it Did not improve my mood. To put it in a poem, at least’s A better way to brood.

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Date: 3/6/2022 10:35:00 AM
LOL...Very good Ilene. Well written and ignore your husband. He's out of line. You managed to improve yourself and you got him interested in poetry as well...LOL Trevor
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Date: 3/4/2022 12:14:00 PM
I love this confidence "I said, “I write them just for me.”
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Date: 3/3/2022 3:22:00 PM
I feel you!
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Date: 3/2/2022 10:17:00 AM
5-stars on your forehead for this one! Remind your husband that MANY people enjoy reading poetry but refrain from commenting for one reason or another. He WOULD enjoy it if he saw just how clever is your command of the English language, so keep writing! Aloha! Rico
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/3/2022 10:15:00 AM
My 2nd thought was your poem earned POTD; what did your husband do to win public acclaim on the same day (opening a can of beer all by himself does not count). However, neither of my children read my limericks; after 50+-years, they both know how their old man thinks! Aloha!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 3/2/2022 12:11:00 PM
thanks for your support, rico! my husband does read my poems, but was referring to other people in my life who don't...
Date: 3/1/2022 5:30:00 PM
Well, Ilene, you tell him I READ your poems. I may not always comment because sometimes I don't have anything to say...or to add...but I read them. You have a gift. Never stop using it!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 3/2/2022 12:10:00 PM
thank you, milton! i appreciate you reading and commenting on my poems. my husband was referring to some friends and relatives of mine who never read them or, if they do, mention that fact to me...

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