More Beautiful

These girls now a days
Trashy with their clothes
And sleazy in their ways
Their legs they never close

But me I am classy
A lady for one man
They frown as they pass me
Their stuck up clan

They can’t see what I do
That they are idiots
Who haven’t a clue
They’ll never match my wits

My brain and intellect
Is more beautiful 
Than their face of product
And their inside of dull
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 9:03 AM
Interesting work..There are ladies out there that are young with great qualities who will enjoy reading this one..Sara
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 12:20 PM
- Words of truth from your thoughts ..... well done Elissa! - Like it - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Ekechukwu Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 11:38 PM
Wow! A wonderful write,kudos! Welcome to poetrysoup,here u find d poetic treasures in vast quantities. Alwaz, Based oin Belief
Sergi Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 6:07 PM
way to stand up for yourself you can look in the mirror and feel proud. Nice poem
A  Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 10:40 AM
Hi Elissa, wow.... that's the way to express your womely health. Keep them legs close, and out wit them ladies out there, painting their faces better than a clown... You go girl! love this... SKAT
Melugin Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 5:22 PM
Your pen is does beautiful also!!
Guzzi Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 3:32 PM
A strong verse! Light & Love
Tacito Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 2:13 PM
Ha. I can dig this. A lady who doesn't behave like "just a girl"...color me impressed. Well done. :)
Koven Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 1:50 PM
So tell us how you really feel. Sounds like an avalanche of hurt. Allan
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