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These girls now a days Trashy with their clothes And sleazy in their ways Their legs they never close But me I am classy A lady for one man They frown as they pass me Their stuck up clan They can’t see what I do That they are idiots Who haven’t a clue They’ll never match my wits My brain and intellect Is more beautiful Than their face of product And their inside of dull

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/3/2013 9:03:00 AM
Interesting work..There are ladies out there that are young with great qualities who will enjoy reading this one..Sara
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Date: 12/2/2013 12:20:00 PM
- Words of truth from your thoughts ..... well done Elissa! - Like it - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/29/2013 11:38:00 PM
Wow! A wonderful write,kudos! Welcome to poetrysoup,here u find d poetic treasures in vast quantities. Alwaz, Based oin Belief
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Date: 11/26/2013 6:07:00 PM
way to stand up for yourself you can look in the mirror and feel proud. Nice poem
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Date: 11/26/2013 10:40:00 AM
Hi Elissa, wow.... that's the way to express your womely health. Keep them legs close, and out wit them ladies out there, painting their faces better than a clown... You go girl! love this... SKAT
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Date: 11/25/2013 5:22:00 PM
Your pen is does beautiful also!!
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Date: 11/25/2013 3:32:00 PM
A strong verse! Light & Love
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Date: 11/25/2013 2:13:00 PM
Ha. I can dig this. A lady who doesn't behave like "just a girl"...color me impressed. Well done. :)
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Date: 11/25/2013 1:50:00 PM
So tell us how you really feel. Sounds like an avalanche of hurt. Allan
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