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I remember we were both lit by the moon
and I asked what I should do.
You said just stand there and look beautiful...

So I tried and tried
but I could only look cute
and you said thats alright
that'll do
that'll do
that'll do...better

My heart sank and soared.
First taste of lips, yours.
Love picked up as the rain poured.
Only word I uttered, 'more'.

I could drown in your breath, love.
Love, I could drown in your breath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 11, 2010 at 5:32 PM
sweet write, nice one . and enjoyed
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