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I remember we were both lit by the moon and I asked what I should do. You said just stand there and look beautiful... So I tried and tried but I could only look cute and you said thats alright that'll do that'll do that'll do...better My heart sank and soared. First taste of lips, yours. Love picked up as the rain poured. Only word I uttered, 'more'. I could drown in your breath, love. Love, I could drown in your breath.

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Date: 5/11/2010 5:32:00 PM
sweet write, nice one . and enjoyed
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