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see more than water

             dimensional gateways

               entity of life



  5 -5- 2018

Written for haiku contest - sea
Sponsor Mick Talbot
1st placing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 2:59 PM
Congrats on a great win, Virginia.
Waters Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 2:03 AM
thanking you kindly V
Allison Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 7:03 PM
Many congrats Virginia:-) hugs jan xx
Waters Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 2:02 AM
Thank you. Love always V
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Congrats, Virginia!
Waters Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 4:59 PM
thank you.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 2:43 PM
Fabulously deep piece :) Congratulations on your top win! xomo
Waters Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 4:52 PM
Cool ty . water is only just now starting to be studied in all its dimensional forms. V
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 2:33 PM
Congratulations on your great first place win, Virginia, the imagery is fabulous... eve
Waters Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Many thanks - V I am always encouraged by knowing our sea=life can come and go at will
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 8:23 AM
- Congratulations on your great first place in the contest, Virginia :) - Happy Weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Waters Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 4:47 PM
thanks for the kind thoughts - V
Cunningham Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 2:12 AM
Without it we wouldn't exist, great hakiu Virginia, congrats. You've got the bug too, I cant stop either. Tom.
Waters Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 5:09 PM
TY Tom -so good to find so many kindred spirits here. Never under estimate the power of a few free thoughts. V
Talbot Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 11:23 PM
Great haiku, profound, sadly the gates are rapidly closing and all life facing extinction! Congratulations on your win Virginia. Mick
Waters Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 1:32 AM
Wow wasn't expecting this. thank you so much. Must say you have opened my haiku floodgates - can't stop writing them now.
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 11:21 PM
Congrats on your top win, Virginia.
Waters Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 1:33 AM
much appreciated - standards are very high
Gentry Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 1:04 PM
Oh I like this!
Waters Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 1:34 AM
Thank you - my first comment
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