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I think he was better than me He saw more than me He wasn’t as materialistic as I was and didn’t seem to care about the differences Our quotient was still just me thinking about being lesser than someone who ripped away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/14/2018 3:06:00 AM
I want more of this story; perhaps you could make it into a narrative poem? It has a ring of truth and self-reflection.
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