Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

Moral Code

Our journey in life can be a rocky road
we must strive to follow a moral code 
The correct path is one we must choose
it's wise to keep clear of drugs and booze
Please make sure you don’t drink and drive
as folk get killed who should still be alive 
So do not take drugs or hit the bottle
then get in a car and hit the throttle!

Morality poetry Contest

Sponsored by Mark Koplin

01/03/2021

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Marilene Evans January 15, 2021 at 8:39 PM So so true. Well penned. Congratulations on your top win.

John Watt January 13, 2021 at 10:28 AM Back to congratulate you for your first place win and sobering reminder. Hugs ~ John

Sam Kauffman January 13, 2021 at 8:50 AM Congratulations on your first place win Jan! This should be pasted to every dashboard and on every license! Well done my friend. hugs :)

Paula Goldsmith January 13, 2021 at 7:16 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. It should be read by all drivers. Enjoy your win/day with blessings...........

Rama Balasubramanian January 13, 2021 at 3:56 AM Congratulations Jan. This was a awesome write.

Beata Agustin January 12, 2021 at 10:35 PM Congrats! Thanks for this admonition. God bless you.

Anisha Dutta January 12, 2021 at 8:15 PM BIG CONGRATS to win TOP

Alexis Y. January 12, 2021 at 3:14 PM Hi Jan, This is an excellent entry for the contest theme. In eight lines, you wrote a good write about morality. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis

Mark Koplin January 12, 2021 at 1:05 PM Congratulations Jan on your top placement and wonderful poem!! Excellent job!!!

Caren Krutsinger January 7, 2021 at 8:07 PM So aptly penned. I was expecting this, and was pleased as I read. Jan Allison January 8, 2021 at 2:07 PM thanks caren:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf January 5, 2021 at 6:29 PM Nicely done for the contest, Jan... I was wondering though: Where's the couplet containing 'Don't poop in soup?!' lol. Go, girl! :) gw Jan Allison January 7, 2021 at 11:02 AM ah now there is the rub its intimated recently on a blog that write porn poetry so a bit of poop in soup I am not sure if its acceptable:-(hugs jan xx

Lindsay Laurie January 4, 2021 at 10:08 PM Hello Jan … yes, it’s the concern for others that needs us all to make right decisions and avoid mind altering substances when in public - good advice Jan - Lindsay Jan Allison January 7, 2021 at 11:01 AM thanks Lindsay:-) hugs jan xx

John Watt January 4, 2021 at 12:15 AM This one really hits home to me Jan. I lost my 26-year-old cousin to a drunk driver. I hope many read and heed. New year hugs ~ John Jan Allison January 4, 2021 at 7:20 AM That is so sad John i am sorry you can relate to my poem on a personal level:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2021 at 5:55 PM I love how you did your poem on morals, Jan. I almost forgot all about this contest as I made my list of poems to work on. My time is going away. I had computer problems all day and had to have Geek Squad fix it remotely for me. NOw I need to do so many other things and school starts tomorrow. Oh my, why is there not enough hours in the day? Why? WHy? Jan Allison January 4, 2021 at 7:20 AM I am sure you will pen a gem Andrea, glad you got your computer fixed:-) hugs jan xx

Caren Krutsinger January 3, 2021 at 2:47 PM Impressive! I doubt that two people today out of ten have ever heard of the word 'throttle". Your wisdom is peeking out. Rico Leffanta January 4, 2021 at 10:56 AM Go to Tesco's, where mam's threaten to throttle their children every day of the week! Aloha! Rico Jan Allison January 3, 2021 at 3:33 PM Thanks Caren:-) hugs jan xx

Victor Buhagiar January 3, 2021 at 1:09 PM A moral code is based on the seven deadly sins. ~~ Jan Allison January 3, 2021 at 1:44 PM thanks for those wise words Victor:-) hugs jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose January 3, 2021 at 10:53 AM I agree Jan, too man people think only of their pleasure, and in doing that someone lose someone they treasure. Wish we could show them a video tape of the after math, that would make them stone sober, Thank you for sharing Jan, Happy New Year dear friend. Jan Allison January 3, 2021 at 11:23 AM Thanks so much for dropping by Vienna:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta January 3, 2021 at 10:28 AM You have just written a winner for MADD! Aloha! Rico Jan Allison January 3, 2021 at 10:36 AM thanks Rico I hope Mark likes it:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham January 3, 2021 at 10:19 AM Sadly not everyone follows the code jan and leave a trail of destruction in their wake. Good luck in the contest. Tom Jan Allison January 3, 2021 at 10:36 AM Have seen too many tragedies, one ten yr old lad here lost a leg on holiday in Turkey when hit by a drunk driver, seven years on his father is still seeking justice for him:-( hugs jan xx