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Moonstruck Josette

Moonstruck Josette
There's a sad tale told of moonstruck Josette Who's love turned into ashes of regret She found romance when only sweet sixteen With the most handsome man she'd ever seen. Though he treated her unkindly at times Josette overlooked those menacing signs She adored him despite his cruel trait Then came the day he decided her fate. He took her to a wood where no one goes Josette felt he was well nigh to propose He said to close her eyes and count to ten Poor Josette never opened them again. Down in the woods lies a silent Josette Her demise so tragic one can't forget. *+* 13th November 2022
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Wolf Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 7:07 PM
Josette, moonstruck. Me, thunderstruck. Creeps like this one are a sign of the times, i guess.
Pandit Avatar
November 19, 2022 at 6:43 AM
A poignant story skillfully delivered, Belle. It may be fiction but there are parallels to this story in real life. Let your imagination fly my friend.
Edmonds  Avatar
November 19, 2022 at 11:45 AM
Bless you Vijay, Imagination's a wonderful thing, the motivation that brings a poet's pen wings.… Belle
Proxenos Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 1:48 AM
What a murderous creep this chap was, but I do believe in good and bad karma and his will be very bad! Enjoy your poetry my friend. Hugs blessings
Edmonds  Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 4:14 AM
Thank you Jennifer, it’s to be hoped there’s no creeps such as this, if there is may the drama bring them bad karma… Hugs, Belle x
Leffanta Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 10:22 AM
I don't know how people can believe killing someone will solve their problems?
Edmonds  Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 6:12 PM
Sadly some folk do, only fictional though. Thank you Rico… Belle
Buhagiar Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 8:20 AM
Sounds like some serial killer. Hope he'll be caught.
Edmonds  Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 6:08 PM
I guess he would be caught, thank you Victor it’s always a delight to have one’s poetry read, most grateful… Belle
Poet Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 6:16 AM
What a sad and heartbreaking tale, dear Josette didn't know she would pass away so suddenly and unexpectedly. What a beautiful story you have to tell, Belle.
Edmonds  Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 6:04 PM
Thank you Sotto, a made up story, not sure where the idea came from, but pleased you enjoyed reading… Belle
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