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Moonstruck

Life is an amazing adventure Not for the faint of heart The ups and downs, the challenges Can weaken resolve from the start When you're a very young child Things seem so simple each day Biggest decision you're forced to make What kind of game to play Girls don't yet enter the picture They're annoying and spoil the fun Whoever invited them to play? They can't even shoot a gun All they want to do every day Is play with their dolls and stuff Don't climb trees, play bows and arrows Or wrestle to see who's tough Sooner or later we're all teenagers The girls seem quite different now Attitudes towards them changes suddenly Suddenly we're moonstruck, kerpow! Next thing you know it's junior prom And we're trying to show we can dance Not much rhythm here I'm afraid Like a turkey walking round in a trance Meet your soul mate and then you marry Buy a house with a view of the lake Soon you're blessed with a couple of kids Then you're a Grandpa for goodness sakes Well that was a whirlwind journey Through a lifetime of happy and sad Now be honest, you loved every damn minute 'Twas the best life you've ever had!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/16/2017 12:33:00 PM
Lol sounds like a good lifetime Jack.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/16/2017 1:57:00 PM
I knew you had it within your talent.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/16/2017 12:41:00 PM
Thought I'd Throw you a curve! LOL love, Jackson xxx
Date: 10/16/2017 7:33:00 AM
You have me smiling and crying in my coffee this morning.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/16/2017 8:47:00 AM
Awww... happy and sorry! Enjoy the brew in spite!!! lol
Date: 10/16/2017 7:11:00 AM
You only have one life so you better make the best of it, enjoy those moonstruck moments, and make sure they are in the moon as that is the best place to have them, kerpow! I loved the way you have wove each time period within your incredible poem, though most of your piece was written within the early years, it does grow quickly into the later years when you become a grandpa! And I love each moment of all of the changes! What a grand piece my friend! Great Work!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/16/2017 7:17:00 AM
Mucho thanks my dear friend! HOPE YOUR DAY IS FILLED WITH HAPPY!!!
Date: 10/16/2017 4:07:00 AM
Absolutely charming Jack... oh how the years fly by ... and then we die:-) Lets hope we have a few more years to write my friend:-) hugs jan xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/16/2017 4:28:00 AM
LOL Thought I'd break out of thr mold for a bit!!! Love Bro! xxx

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