Moonstruck

eyes wide
tear escapes
seeing the moon

mesmerized 
dazed by beauty
too great

moonhaiku

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Ibohal Kshetrimayum

November 29, 2018 at 12:41 AM

Wow! Eyes wide/tear escapes.. Love it.

P.S. Awtry

November 29, 2018 at 8:16 AM

Thank you. I’m glad you liked it. :)

Susan Ashley

November 12, 2018 at 8:09 AM

Overwhelming beauty.. An alluring haiku P.S. Warmest wishes ~Susan

P.S. Awtry

November 13, 2018 at 12:05 PM

thank you, Susan :)

Wren Rushing

October 19, 2018 at 7:06 PM

Another beautiful poem. p.s. I should go check out this moon.

P.S. Awtry

October 20, 2018 at 6:13 PM

10/24 is the "hunter's moon." I am marking my calendar :)

P.S. Awtry

October 19, 2018 at 9:22 PM

Thank you, Wren :)

Andrea Dietrich

October 18, 2018 at 6:14 PM

these are very nice. Let me go see a few more.

P.S. Awtry

October 18, 2018 at 11:24 PM

thank you

Jean Bush

October 16, 2018 at 5:32 PM

Very lovely. Beauty too much to bear.

P.S. Awtry

October 16, 2018 at 6:33 PM

thank you. so many things are like that :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 16, 2018 at 2:16 PM

Wonderful Haiku!

P.S. Awtry

October 16, 2018 at 4:07 PM

Thank you so much :)

Line Gauthier

October 16, 2018 at 10:58 AM

Lovely image, PS.

P.S. Awtry

October 16, 2018 at 4:06 PM

thank you for reading it and for the compliment :)

Moonstruck

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