Moon's Light

It is almost full moon
and I am surrounded by Earth in the night light,
Up here perched on top of my roof
As if I had no where else to go.
I feel more real up here than I do down there,
Yet I am isolated and still
as night’s air hangs on my skin while moon’s light absorbs me
into the life we forget as we go about our day.
Songs of crickets in the ground wash over the noisy sea
Beneath the idea I live as me.
I peer through your open window
Distracted by the colour of your TV,
Cars in the streets, people pacing in their homes.
But moon’s light absorbs me away
Into the dark blue sky of stars
Abundant above in absolute adoration…
And I am in awe.
Why not this reality set me free?
Why am I bound by day and all its modern technology?
My spirit is weeping.
The longer I sit upon my roof
The clearer I see through dark trees and vast seas
Alone with the sounds of the night’s world
my being years for inner peace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/22/2010 2:36:00 AM
Dominique, You are a talented poet and I shall look forward to reading more of your enchanted work. I loved this one. Mahalo, Connie
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Date: 9/21/2010 4:08:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. luv your creative write... u just missed the LUNA contest but check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv...
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Date: 9/21/2010 5:56:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Dominique. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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