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Brian Strand's Wordplay Contest ... Entered 18 Dec 2024

soft the moon robed in yellow loft of clouds...her home's halo-- nights sift the hues pale to bright while fist of ray gleams on lune's flight: come, fast...gaze at moon's wonder her fest , time's glory anywhere!

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/28/2024 11:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/23/2024 2:23:00 PM

Nette, you make me want to run outside and look at the moon right now! The universe gives us a lot to ponder and so much to think about. Smiles!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/23/2024 2:36:00 AM

A short but definitely enchanting poem that reflects your style of writing, dear Nette. The moon hardly ever fails to inspire, and it succeeds extremely well in this case. ~ May I take this opportunity to wish you a joyous and blessed Christmas ~ paul

Paige Hind

Date: 12/22/2024 5:33:00 PM

Loved this - it's original and very lovely <3

Maria Williams

Date: 12/21/2024 11:26:00 PM

Dear Nette, You poem is subtly descriptive and I imagine the moon in the yellow robes softly cocooned in the soft fluffy clouds. Lovely. I want to take this opportunity to wish you and your family a Very Happy, Joyous Christmas gazing at the wonder of the Stars and moon. Hugs Maria

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 12/19/2024 6:00:00 AM

Dear Nette, it was almost like stepping into a dream where time pauses, and the moon is the center of everything. The imagery of the "moon robed in yellow" and "loft of clouds" creates such a soft, mystical atmosphere that feels both intimate and vast. Nette This is such a lovely piece, filled with light and wonder. Happy Holidays, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/18/2024 12:37:00 PM

When the moon is present dear Nette, it is always a fest, always a celebration of life and beauty, Merry Christmas dear friend :)

Tom Woody

Date: 12/18/2024 11:43:00 AM

We had a beautiful one here in Florida several days ago. Your descriptive words do it justice

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/18/2024 1:22:00 AM

Oh what an enchanting take for the contest, dear Nette! You've mind-blowing skills of weaving words together whilst presenting an artistic imagery for the reader to devour ~ I love this moon-adorned piece, glorious in every way... And the halo of moon ahhh that's so inspiring and magical. Truly a pleasure reading your poem today, it's absolutely stunning! Best wishes for the contest... sending you lots of love and light always.