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L.A. Is My Beat

Moonlit Dance Under the Street Lamp Tb

street lamp soft shine
few moths dine out
wings whine endless

11/5/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:51 PM
Congratulations, Eve!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 12:54 PM
It is quite a sight that occasions Hawaii's streetlights, Eve. A warming entry and win, my friend. Aloha, William
Messina Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 4:25 AM
Lovely imagery, Eve. As I said to Emile, I never saw the beauty in moths until I read both of your lovely poems. They are a prime bait for trout fishing that I often use. Maybe I'll use worms instead. (lol) Congratulations on your win! Blessings..
May Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 9:46 AM
Very nice Than-Bauk Eve, best wishes
Eslinger Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 8:21 PM
What super skill yet a read so pleasing, such ease! Applause! Very memorable!
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 1:17 PM
Nice imagery, Eve. I find this simple looking form to actually be very difficult because of the limited syllables to work with.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 12:21 AM
First-class imagery plus great rhyme. You did well. Best for a win. Hugs and blessings.
Empress Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 7:21 PM
Love your rhymes and how you’ve painted imagery! Brilliant! You really are creative. Im thinking of trying this form too. Goodluck for the contest
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