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Moonlit Dance Under the Street Lamp Tb

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street lamp soft shine few moths dine out wings whine endless 11/5/2023

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/17/2023 8:51:00 PM

Congratulations, Eve!

Hilo Poet

Date: 11/17/2023 12:54:00 PM

It is quite a sight that occasions Hawaii's streetlights, Eve. A warming entry and win, my friend. Aloha, William

Charles Messina

Date: 11/17/2023 4:25:00 AM

Lovely imagery, Eve. As I said to Emile, I never saw the beauty in moths until I read both of your lovely poems. They are a prime bait for trout fishing that I often use. Maybe I'll use worms instead. (lol) Congratulations on your win! Blessings..

Joseph May

Date: 11/15/2023 9:46:00 AM

Very nice Than-Bauk Eve, best wishes

Sally Eslinger

Date: 11/6/2023 8:21:00 PM

What super skill yet a read so pleasing, such ease! Applause! Very memorable!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/6/2023 3:36:00 PM

a lovely Than-Bauk, Eve. I found it captivating and admire you for writing in this form. Have a lovely evening, Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2023 1:17:00 PM

Nice imagery, Eve. I find this simple looking form to actually be very difficult because of the limited syllables to work with.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/6/2023 12:21:00 AM

First-class imagery plus great rhyme. You did well. Best for a win. Hugs and blessings.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/5/2023 7:21:00 PM

Love your rhymes and how you’ve painted imagery! Brilliant! You really are creative. Im thinking of trying this form too. Goodluck for the contest