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Moonlight On Water

Shimmering waves of satin ripples, all of the black night,
As lustrous moon visits the river, in its pearls of white.
In the fragrance of the hour, stars twinkle for me tonight;
And the water mirrors the sky, as it did in noon daylight!

Just awakened from dim dreams, in my houseboat on the river,
I again greet porcelain moon, making my heart beat quicker.
A missed beat in the somber rhythm, made the dream I prefer,
Of moonlit diamonds and pearls, dancing on a liquid mirror!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Marcum Wong Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 5:31 PM
Wow Evelyn, You found the perfect video on Youtube to enhance your wonderful words in this gorgeous poem. Breathtaking imagery! This is going into my Faves my friend. Have a great week. Blessings xxoo
Buehler Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 7:01 PM
I am so glad you enjoyed this, Connie. Thank you for your wonderful, joy inspiring words. Have a blessed week yourself. Evelyn xxoo
Austin Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 12:50 AM
Truly lovely. Hoping you get another beautiful view like this tonight and when dawn hits tomorrow. Thanks for sharing!
Buehler Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 10:21 AM
So do I, Kathleen. Thank you for taking the time to share your lovely thoughts with me. :=)
Y. Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 5:09 PM
WoW! Evelyn, You painted a lovely breathtaking night with your skillful pen. I enjoyed the spectacular view. I’m in awe of your gift. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 10:27 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis. I get a lift every time I read your positive, heartwarming words. I'm so glad you liked this. Have a nice week, my friend. :D Evelyn
Rodrigues Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 10:56 AM
Nicely placed words/imagery! I love this, Evelyn!
Buehler Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 5:00 PM
I'm so glad! Thank you, Kim. :D
Buhagiar Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 9:48 PM
Stunning imagery right through. You do have a clear vision of what you imagine.
Buehler Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 5:01 PM
You have my utmost thanks, Victor. :)
Hankins Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 8:25 PM
WOW! Such a beautiful piece of writing, Evelyn. I relished the poem from the first to the last word. Wonderful!!!
Buehler Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 8:40 PM
That is so great to know, L Milton. Your enjoyment of this poem makes the effort worthwhile. Thank you very much. :D
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