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Written 22 August 2024

Placed second in For Moonlight or Sunrise Poery Contest

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Moonlight on Meadows With shines of moonlight on meadows Speckled with tiny drops of dews, The soft, sweet, shining grasses glow With full gleams of ivory hues Fill the air with cute awareness And invite one who truly wish To cherish its serene freshness And sparkling splendour to relish. In the shine of a full moon night Meandering amidst meadows, Sparkling with a silvery light, Dispels inner woes and sorrows Prompts one to scan the inner self Gaze at the serene, silent stars And to be at peace with oneself As the meadows stretching afar. The bright shines of moon on meadows Shooting like arrows from a bow In the neighbouring field below Sketch a speck of shady shadow, Seeming to make a humble wish That the breeze carries to the moon On its willowy wings with bliss To pipe to its destiny soon. On moonlight night amidst meadows Shining with gleams of the full moon The humble wish of the shadow From the moon is to seek a boon To ever light his path on earth To guide him to the route that`s right And when he shall heave his last breath To lead him to realm ever bright.

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Date: 9/5/2024 5:52:00 AM
Dear KG, i really loved this poem how youv painted imagery and played around with words is truly stunning! I especially love your use of colors here too! I also must highlight “ The bright shines of moon on meadows Shooting like arrows from a bow In the neighbouring field below Sketch a speck of shady shadow,” just brilliant ! Very imaginative and creative! Pleasure reading this! Congratulations
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 9/5/2024 8:56:00 AM
Thanks a lot poetess for appreciating the above-mentioned poem and for its placement in the poetry contest sponsored by you. Your positive comments are like shines of the sun urging me to continue with my poetic journey on Poetry Soup amidst health issues and other commitments. Wish you a pleasant day.

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