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A little bit dark for this contest!

Moonlight Madness

MOONLIGHT MADNESS

                                                                ~ cartridge does loiter ~
her mordacious tone threatens
 “don’t trifle with me!”

                dare i elicit
a response from your shackled,
wizened hands, oh slave!”

the genie’s power
revives by the light of moon
                                                               ~ horde of wolves tear flesh ~

3/23/2017
Three haiku
John Hamilton's Eight Word contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Allison Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 4:52 PM
I think this wins the award for the shortest poems Kim - great idea for the contest:-) good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 4:56 PM
Thanks, Jan! xx
Green Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 1:33 PM
This was great Kim. I looked at this contest and it looked too hard for me. I am happy to see what you did with it, this was very creative. Good luck my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 2:25 PM
Thank you, Chris! :)
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