Suzanne Delaney Poet Rhyme

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Moonlight Fades

When moonlight fades from flower and rose
Sweet mystery of dawn unfolds
Now all the dreams of night will pale
Wafting into lilac shadows

As tapestry of daylight grows
Rainbows linger in the dew
Stirring nature and earth to wake
As birdsong trills a new day glows

Sun rays in forest light transpose
We long to keep this morning calm
Yet plans start spinning in our minds 
No time to gaze on peaceful willows

Forget the brilliant lure of Nature’s shows
Or daylight spun from pinks and golds
There will be many more tomorrow’s.  

For Lines to Awaken Your Muse 2 
Joseph May
Line used : The moonlight fades from flower and rose
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Nette Onclaud May 10, 2020 at 2:17 PM ohh, i missed the loveliness of your poems and you, suZ... thanks for coming around!..huggs

Geoffrey Brewer May 7, 2020 at 8:26 AM A lovely selection of images well observed. Well written, Suzanne.

Ralph Sergi May 6, 2020 at 8:56 AM Hi Suz: You have epitomized Dawn! Suzanne Delaney May 7, 2020 at 9:46 AM Thanks Ralph: That’s a wonderful compliment. Be safe dear friend. SuZ

Charles Messina May 6, 2020 at 5:28 AM Beautiful, Suzanne. Thanks for your recent visit. Hope all is well my dear friend. Hugs Charlie Suzanne Delaney May 7, 2020 at 9:40 AM Hi Charles: All is well and hoping the same for you and yours.cheers, SuZ

Richard Lamoureux May 3, 2020 at 11:10 AM How pretty, your muse has been kind to gift us all with this lovely piece. Hugs Rick. Thanks for your visit. Suzanne Delaney May 7, 2020 at 9:39 AM Hi Rick:Thanks for your always encouraging words. Hope you are staying safe and doing all you want around home. Sending smiles. SuZ

Lindsay Laurie April 26, 2020 at 8:25 PM Hello Suzanne … a nice positive verse to bring on a morn, but of course we need more than this for the day, but as you wrote, there will be more tomorrows when this virus succumbs - thanks Suzanne - Lindsay Suzanne Delaney May 7, 2020 at 9:37 AM Hello Lindsay: Glad you are staying safe dear friend. I’m coming over for one of your yarns soon Smiles, SuZ

Timothy Hicks April 25, 2020 at 12:51 AM “We long to keep the morning calm yet plans start spinning in our minds” .... I love mornings like this ... you want to enjoy it as it is, yet the beauty of it inspires one to conjure up the next adventure. I enjoyed the flow of this one. Suzanne Delaney May 7, 2020 at 9:35 AM It is so good to have you back here. I missed your positive vibes. Best, SuZ

Ralph Sergi April 23, 2020 at 5:18 PM Hi Suzanne: Belated congratulations on your win! Suzanne Delaney April 23, 2020 at 7:34 PM Hi Ralph: Thanks for reading and commenting. Stay safe. SuZ

Gordon Mcconnell April 12, 2020 at 1:48 PM A lovely spring like write Suzanne, so nice imagery and rhyme.. Keep well and healthy, Gordon Suzanne Delaney April 23, 2020 at 7:32 PM Hi Gordon: Nice to hear from you. SuZ

Kai Michael Neumann April 5, 2020 at 1:56 PM Beautiful. Suzanne Delaney April 23, 2020 at 7:30 PM Thanks Kai: I appreciate your nice comments. SuZ

Joseph May April 3, 2020 at 11:07 AM Beautifully written Suzanne, Congrats on your win.. Suzanne Delaney April 3, 2020 at 3:40 PM Thanks so much, Joseph: All the lines you chose to Wake the Muse were wonderful. Thanks for awakening mine. Have a happy Spring. SuZ

Harry Horsman March 27, 2020 at 12:25 AM This is wonderful. Suzanne. I like your musing... Suzanne Delaney April 3, 2020 at 3:46 PM Thanks so much, Harry. Stay safe my friend. SuZ

Demetrios Trifiatis March 24, 2020 at 8:55 AM A symphony of stunning imagery rhythmically written dearest Suzanne. Keep safe my dear friend.

Connie Marcum Wong March 23, 2020 at 6:02 PM This is really lovely SuZ. I hope you will share it with PFT. Stay safe. xxoo Suzanne Delaney March 23, 2020 at 7:20 PM Hi ConnieL Thanks for your lovely comment, I will see if I can sign into Google again and share.

Vijay Pandit March 23, 2020 at 7:58 AM Lovely rhythm and flow--a joy to read your poem. Excellent write, SuZ. Suzanne Delaney March 23, 2020 at 8:51 AM Thanks so much, Vijay: This Covid-19 social distancing has enticed my Muse from hiding. Two poems in two days is an unprecedented record for me these past 4 years. Maybe the tide has turned. Appreciate your encouragement, always. SuZ

Mark Koplin March 22, 2020 at 6:57 PM So beautiful! Great poem Suzanne Delaney March 22, 2020 at 8:11 PM Thanks Mark: I appreciate your kind words. SuZ

Tom Cunningham March 22, 2020 at 6:48 PM Love the imagery Suzanne, hopefully there will be many more tomorrows when this crisis is over. Good luck. Stay safe. Tom Suzanne Delaney March 22, 2020 at 8:14 PM My hopes too, Tom: I know if we follow the guidelines we will all make it through. I heard the countries that have malaria have fewer cases of Covid”19, as the chloroquine kills the virus. Time to get back on gin and tonics I think. SuZ