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Moonlight Ballerinas

Fragrant new petals pirouette On stairways of blazed winds, rosette Meadows become a stage… As small ballerinas saunter Enchanting moonlight to linger, Ruffling on ferns arranged... For Susan's Contest :Your Favorite Tail Rhyme,Past or Present * New Poem*

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/24/2013 4:25:00 PM

I enjoyed reading very much ;}

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/30/2012 7:10:00 AM

Enjoyed this one from your versatile Pen nette, wishing you the best for Your new year.."

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2012 10:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Nette. Love Carol

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 12/5/2012 3:25:00 PM

Fantastic and beautiful write,Nette..Congrats on your superb win in this contest...Good to see you at the winners circle....Kudos to you,pal..

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 12/5/2012 12:23:00 AM

Beautifully done Nette! Congrats on your win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/4/2012 4:57:00 PM

Nette., ;-) congratulations in Susan's "Favorite tail rhyme, past or present contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/4/2012 1:28:00 PM

Another stunner nette , Congratulations xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/4/2012 9:45:00 AM

congrats Nette luv on a stellar write so bright and win so sweet for a sweetie ..

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/4/2012 7:48:00 AM

Well done, great win.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/4/2012 7:39:00 AM

Yep, I knew this one was a winner with its whimsical fun flavor...just look at those petals pirouette!!! Congrats to my esteemed teacher. luv, gwendolen

Kash Poet

Date: 12/4/2012 7:32:00 AM

Hey a big congrats on your win!!Beautiful!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2012 5:50:00 PM

Beautiful!

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/24/2012 10:48:00 AM

wonderful and beautiful imagery nette...,love this

Kash Poet

Date: 11/22/2012 8:09:00 AM

Beautiful Tail rhyme here Nette.Very nice imagery.Best wishes to you.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/22/2012 1:08:00 AM

you use such wonderful vocabulary to describe emotions,scenaries,thoughts and beauties.. Wonderfully penned dear Nette..Great visual here .. Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/21/2012 1:11:00 PM

utterly lovely imagery and language Nette luv .. delicate weave of sheer beauty .. winning wishes .. thankxx for sharing bout our woes on site .. we will struggle along ..for poetry will not be denied its creative ways ..

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 11/21/2012 9:21:00 AM

This one is simply grand and colorful, nette:) Jag

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/21/2012 7:08:00 AM

What a delightful image!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/21/2012 5:12:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..That blazed mind is a different line..Thanks for stopping by ..Your reviews are always so encouraging..Sara

Len Gasun

Date: 11/21/2012 1:34:00 AM

Hi, Nette! Every line of your poem is so lovely and beautiful giving a very fascinating image ! I feel like performing a pirouette while reading it. Congrats kaibigan for this outstanding poem. Good luck always. love/hugs, Leonora

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/20/2012 9:37:00 PM

Beautiful imagery here luv. A masterpiece indeed.

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 11/20/2012 7:52:00 PM

This is really beautiful, I always love your poems :) - Hug, Yanny

Daniel Port

Date: 11/20/2012 7:45:00 PM

Very alluring imagery as though I were dancing with nature's flowers. Savored every line.

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/20/2012 7:38:00 PM

BTW, thank you! Thank you for pointing out my error in my poem! The word was supposed to be "with" instead of "we", I changed it so all is better now! Thanks!!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/20/2012 7:19:00 PM

I envision them blooming and immediately taking to dance in a floral ballet...great images in this write, Nette...I pray all is well with YOU!! Luv, gwendolen