Nette Onclaud Poet Tail-rhyme

Moonlight Ballerinas

Fragrant new petals pirouette

On stairways of blazed winds, rosette 

Meadows become a stage…

As small ballerinas saunter

Enchanting moonlight to linger,

Ruffling on ferns arranged...



For Susan's Contest :Your Favorite
Tail Rhyme,Past or Present

* New Poem*

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Debbie Duncan January 24, 2013 at 4:25 PM I enjoyed reading very much ;}

Joe Maverick December 30, 2012 at 7:10 AM Enjoyed this one from your versatile Pen nette, wishing you the best for Your new year.."

Carol Sunshine Brown December 7, 2012 at 10:58 AM Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Nette. Love Carol

Olusegun Arowolo December 5, 2012 at 3:25 PM Fantastic and beautiful write,Nette..Congrats on your superb win in this contest...Good to see you at the winners circle....Kudos to you,pal..

Vicky Tsiluma December 5, 2012 at 12:23 AM Beautifully done Nette! Congrats on your win!

Poet Destroyer A December 4, 2012 at 4:57 PM Nette., ;-) congratulations in Susan's "Favorite tail rhyme, past or present contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 4, 2012 at 1:28 PM Another stunner nette , Congratulations xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 4, 2012 at 9:45 AM congrats Nette luv on a stellar write so bright and win so sweet for a sweetie ..

Richard Lamoureux December 4, 2012 at 7:48 AM Well done, great win.

Gwendolen Song December 4, 2012 at 7:39 AM Yep, I knew this one was a winner with its whimsical fun flavor...just look at those petals pirouette!!! Congrats to my esteemed teacher. luv, gwendolen

Kash Poet December 4, 2012 at 7:32 AM Hey a big congrats on your win!!Beautiful!!

Andrea Dietrich November 29, 2012 at 5:50 PM Beautiful!

Harry Horsman November 24, 2012 at 10:48 AM wonderful and beautiful imagery nette...,love this

Kash Poet November 22, 2012 at 8:09 AM Beautiful Tail rhyme here Nette.Very nice imagery.Best wishes to you.

Charmaine Chircop November 22, 2012 at 1:08 AM you use such wonderful vocabulary to describe emotions,scenaries,thoughts and beauties.. Wonderfully penned dear Nette..Great visual here .. Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 21, 2012 at 1:11 PM utterly lovely imagery and language Nette luv .. delicate weave of sheer beauty .. winning wishes .. thankxx for sharing bout our woes on site .. we will struggle along ..for poetry will not be denied its creative ways ..

S.Jagathsimhan Nair November 21, 2012 at 9:21 AM This one is simply grand and colorful, nette:) Jag

Richard Lamoureux November 21, 2012 at 7:08 AM What a delightful image!

Sara Kendrick November 21, 2012 at 5:12 AM Enjoyed reading your creative work..That blazed mind is a different line..Thanks for stopping by ..Your reviews are always so encouraging..Sara

Len Gasun November 21, 2012 at 1:34 AM Hi, Nette! Every line of your poem is so lovely and beautiful giving a very fascinating image ! I feel like performing a pirouette while reading it. Congrats kaibigan for this outstanding poem. Good luck always. love/hugs, Leonora

Tahera Mannan November 20, 2012 at 9:37 PM Beautiful imagery here luv. A masterpiece indeed.

Yanny Widjanarko November 20, 2012 at 7:52 PM This is really beautiful, I always love your poems :) - Hug, Yanny

Daniel Port November 20, 2012 at 7:45 PM Very alluring imagery as though I were dancing with nature's flowers. Savored every line.

Russell Sivey November 20, 2012 at 7:38 PM BTW, thank you! Thank you for pointing out my error in my poem! The word was supposed to be "with" instead of "we", I changed it so all is better now! Thanks!!

Gwendolen Song November 20, 2012 at 7:19 PM I envision them blooming and immediately taking to dance in a floral ballet...great images in this write, Nette...I pray all is well with YOU!! Luv, gwendolen

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