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Moonlight

The moon glistens bright Trees extend to the moon light Darkness fades to night

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Date: 8/20/2013 8:40:00 PM
Hi Phyllis, marveling into the beauty and mystery of the darkness fading into the night. you captured one of the many beautiful imageries, -- trees reaching to touch the beam... awesome and lovely... SKAT
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Date: 6/16/2011 9:12:00 AM
Nice use of imagery to carry your thoughts. Enjoyed reading this poem today. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 11/20/2010 9:50:00 PM
YEs, you describe such a night perfectly!
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Date: 7/14/2010 12:34:00 PM
3 beautiful lines, make for a lovely poem! Congratulations on this feature, Phyllis!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 7/14/2010 11:27:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on Poetry Soup home page this week, you are such a great talent. Please keep your poetry pen dancing to the lyrics of your heart. Be great and enjoy the honor. Have a lovely week. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/14/2010 11:13:00 AM
Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. It was good to read this again. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Another honor for your to enjoy. Keep on writing!!! Karen
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Date: 7/14/2010 8:29:00 AM
beautiful! congratulations on being featured!
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:26:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup Phyllis.. a charmer to share with us all.. with luv..
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Date: 7/12/2010 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Phyllis. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2008 12:20:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme--a different approach for a haiku. What a peaceful scene. I enjoyed it. Karen
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Date: 9/9/2008 8:27:00 AM
A beautiful 'as is' moment Phyllis .Your words carry us there.rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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