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Moonlight

The moon glistens bright

Trees extend to the moon light

Darkness fades to night

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Skat A

August 20, 2013 at 8:40 PM

Hi Phyllis, marveling into the beauty and mystery of the darkness fading into the night. you captured one of the many beautiful imageries, -- trees reaching to touch the beam... awesome and lovely... SKAT

June 16, 2011 at 9:12 AM

Nice use of imagery to carry your thoughts. Enjoyed reading this poem today. Keep on writing! Karen

Andrea Dietrich

November 20, 2010 at 9:50 PM

YEs, you describe such a night perfectly!

Carrie Richards

July 14, 2010 at 12:34 PM

3 beautiful lines, make for a lovely poem! Congratulations on this feature, Phyllis!! Love, Carrie

Adeleke Adeite

July 14, 2010 at 11:27 AM

Congrats on having your poem being featured on Poetry Soup home page this week, you are such a great talent. Please keep your poetry pen dancing to the lyrics of your heart. Be great and enjoy the honor. Have a lovely week. Love, Adeleke

July 14, 2010 at 11:13 AM

Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. It was good to read this again. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Another honor for your to enjoy. Keep on writing!!! Karen