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Mooningful Nights

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I love watching the full moon on a clear night, but when the lips of mother nature blows past some hoovering clouds... it coild kill the moment instantly.

ENCOMPASSED by shadows...of the trees In my mind...CONSTERNATION awakens me My PREDILECTION... of a midnights breeze APATHY invades...let's me be The moon is full...my REVERENCE shows An EARTHLINESS feeling...when it glows A cloudy CONDEMNATION...blowing free 7 Lines, 7 Words: Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by Lu Loo 11/3/2018

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Line Gauthier

Date: 12/1/2018 7:47:00 AM

A lovely read, Charles.

Joseph May

Date: 11/28/2018 8:41:00 AM

Very nicely penned Charles..Congrats on your win..

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 11/28/2018 1:10:00 AM

Big congrats on your win in Lu Loo's contest, Charles - keep writing, my friend! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :-)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/27/2018 1:57:00 PM

When the night is bright, there is peace all around. Sometimes, those lingering clouds are exciting. :) I love the sky, snow white clouds- moments when the wind touches everything- softly. Of course- when the wind is fierce- watch out!! :) Congratulations Charlie, on this win. ~ Brandy

Eve Roper

Date: 11/27/2018 1:19:00 PM

Nicely done,Charles. I like the sentence on your introduction; when the lips of mother nature blows past some hoovering clouds. Congratulation on your win :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/27/2018 12:27:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Nicely placed words.

Lu Loo

Date: 11/27/2018 7:33:00 AM

great poem about nature dear Charles...beautifully expressed, and loved the rhythm and rhyme. Thank you and congratulations on your placement. Hugs...:)-luloo

Charles Messina
Date: 11/27/2018 8:55:00 AM

Thank you so much, Lu! I am truly humbled to see that I placed in your contest. I had no idea that most of these words ever existed...lol Happy holidays, my dear friend...blessings and hugs :) Charlie

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 11/4/2018 2:44:00 AM

Great mood and atmosphere, great write.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/3/2018 2:25:00 PM

Well written Charlie, using the allocated words. Good luck. Tom.

Charles Messina
Date: 11/3/2018 2:40:00 PM

Thank you again, Tom. Honestly, most of these words are new to me...lol Have a great weekend! Charlie