Charles Messina Poet Rhyme

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I love watching the full moon on a clear night, but when the lips of mother nature blows past some hoovering clouds... it coild kill the moment instantly.

Mooningful Nights

ENCOMPASSED by shadows...of the trees 
In my mind...CONSTERNATION awakens me 
My PREDILECTION... of a midnights breeze 
APATHY invades...let's me be 
The moon is full...my REVERENCE shows 
An EARTHLINESS feeling...when it glows 
A cloudy CONDEMNATION...blowing free  


7 Lines, 7 Words: Rhyme Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Lu Loo 
11/3/2018

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Line Gauthier December 1, 2018 at 7:47 AM A lovely read, Charles.

Joseph May November 28, 2018 at 8:41 AM Very nicely penned Charles..Congrats on your win..

Gregory Richard Barden November 28, 2018 at 1:10 AM Big congrats on your win in Lu Loo's contest, Charles - keep writing, my friend! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :-)

Brandy Nicole November 27, 2018 at 1:57 PM When the night is bright, there is peace all around. Sometimes, those lingering clouds are exciting. :) I love the sky, snow white clouds- moments when the wind touches everything- softly. Of course- when the wind is fierce- watch out!! :) Congratulations Charlie, on this win. ~ Brandy

Eve Roper November 27, 2018 at 1:19 PM Nicely done,Charles. I like the sentence on your introduction; when the lips of mother nature blows past some hoovering clouds. Congratulation on your win :)

Mystic Rose Rose November 27, 2018 at 12:27 PM Congrats on your win, Nicely placed words.

Beautiful Scars November 27, 2018 at 7:33 AM great poem about nature dear Charles...beautifully expressed, and loved the rhythm and rhyme. Thank you and congratulations on your placement. Hugs...:)-luloo Charles Messina November 27, 2018 at 8:55 AM Thank you so much, Lu! I am truly humbled to see that I placed in your contest. I had no idea that most of these words ever existed...lol Happy holidays, my dear friend...blessings and hugs :) Charlie

Lawrence Sharp November 4, 2018 at 2:44 AM Great mood and atmosphere, great write.

Tom Cunningham November 3, 2018 at 2:25 PM Well written Charlie, using the allocated words. Good luck. Tom. Charles Messina November 3, 2018 at 2:40 PM Thank you again, Tom. Honestly, most of these words are new to me...lol Have a great weekend! Charlie