Moonchild

outside she dances/
wind prancin along side of her curves/
she swirves and the breeze wraps around her bust/
that lust literally busts/ 
she crys out in moves hear me groove/
it's a must to fuss these feelings/
so smooth she's smothered with thoughts/
she sings in distraught/
with her eyes so indulged/
they bulge as she prys through her surroundings/ 
she tries to live the life of legends/
who sought and fought for the world be their heavens/
so she hereby stand sitting out/
She must be a little tea pot her words are bubbling/
so here they come out this young womans spout/
and they sound troubling trying to figure her meanings whereabouts/
so she still talk and question till her lips & mouth turn drought/
let she continue to recognize and point out the tension/
in a dimension unyet kown to the current peoples obsession/
with not the world but techonology progression/
but she dares not stress for she knows she's blessed/
so here she dances that's me and my words in movement expressed./
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mohammad Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 7:49 AM
Awesome one..Enjoyed the imagery..Thanks for sharing
Johnson Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 6:44 PM
Loved the imagery! Made a very vivid picture in my mind
Revolution Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 3:37 PM
Thank you very much! :)
Tsiluma Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 11:57 PM
Hi Maxine - beautiful poem. Your description and imagery of the 'moonchild' brings the poem to life and speaks of strength of character. Very well written. I would like to extend my hand in welcome to the PoetrySoup community. There’s a lot to learn from each other here and hopefully you will have a great time while at it. Feel free to check out my poems when you can. I am looking forward to reading more from you. Vicky.
Revolution Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 3:37 PM
Very kind words Vicky thank you so much. I'll be stopping by your page soon :)
Zimmer Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 3:59 AM
Cool poem! Clever rhyming,
Revolution Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 3:37 PM
Thanks Jeromy!
Campi Avatar
January 5, 2014 at 3:34 AM
an interesting poem. perhaps dancing is a good therapy. Thanks for sharing your work. Jancarl
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