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Moon Swoon

"o-poss-a-moon," she.
o-poss-i-bly, will he ask?
impossible dreams


Kim Rodrigues (c) 2017

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

February 17, 2017 at 4:47 PM

Lovely A 7.

Kim Rodrigues

February 17, 2017 at 5:48 PM

Thanks so much, Abdullah! :)

Jill Spagnola

February 16, 2017 at 12:03 AM

Wow! Ms. Rodrigues you nailed this, one of my favorite forms,a saweet 7+. I love that your seemingly, simple expression flows so rhythmically, yet only one concrete meaning still elludes me. I see multipul reflections....b e a utiful...peace PS Thank you for your awesome encouragement! :)

Kim Rodrigues

February 16, 2017 at 6:00 AM

Thank you, Jill! And I so appreciate your encouragement also :)