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Double Haiku

Moon Swim

day tucks into lake
beneath a blanket of stars~
sun lends light to moon

water gleams with night~
still sky shatters as frogs 
splash into the moon
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Sambourne Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 7:08 PM
I really like the way you weave natural icons like water, sky, sun + moon into a frog-lake-habitat. Excellent! Most creative. Be well. Brian
Gondolf Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 11:05 AM
You paint a beautiful, romantic picture with this haiku, Jessica. Nicely done. John
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