Moon Swim

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Double Haiku

day tucks into lake beneath a blanket of stars~ sun lends light to moon water gleams with night~ still sky shatters as frogs splash into the moon

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/17/2023 7:08:00 PM

I really like the way you weave natural icons like water, sky, sun + moon into a frog-lake-habitat. Excellent! Most creative. Be well. Brian

Tom Woody

Date: 8/17/2023 1:18:00 PM

Awesome doubler Jessica. I love the word portrait you created, a frog splashing into a reflection of the moon. You're quite good

John Gondolf

Date: 8/17/2023 11:05:00 AM

You paint a beautiful, romantic picture with this haiku, Jessica. Nicely done. John