Moon Spoon

Those times we are both seen in the sky,
my darling sun and I. Yin to my yen. It's then
   I wish she would spoon with this moon.

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Line Gauthier

November 18, 2017 at 8:06 PM

Congrats on your win, Jean.

Jean Murray

November 19, 2017 at 4:18 AM

Thank you Line.

Gregory Richard Barden

November 18, 2017 at 5:15 AM

Best wishes and congrats on your placement, Jean ... keep writing, friend! :-)

Jean Murray

November 18, 2017 at 8:30 AM

Of course Greg. The bug is in my system now. Again thank you for stopping by. I always appreciate any comments.

Kai Michael Neumann

November 17, 2017 at 2:23 AM

Hi Jean. Darren is correct. Three lines sometimes say so much more than many lines (I am myself 'guilty of the latter). Willing to learn from you. Kai

Jean Murray

November 17, 2017 at 5:13 AM

Morning Kai. Thank you for the placement. I am no teacher as I have had no training myself. For me words are just something to play around with.

Darren White

December 31, 2016 at 7:15 AM

NO, don't delete please. Some of my own N/A poems I consider my very best. It's just a matter of personal opinion of a judge, which is very acceptable too! And NOT egocentric :)

Jean Murray

December 31, 2016 at 10:36 AM

Good! That's it then. It stays.

Paul Callus

December 28, 2016 at 5:25 PM

This is very creative, Jean....would have been a pleasure to see it on the winners' list!! Never mind...I suppose not all great minds think alike:) ~ Regards // paul

Paul Callus

December 29, 2016 at 7:47 AM

No, not an egocentric...just a lover of words:)

Jean Murray

December 28, 2016 at 5:39 PM

That's so nice of you to say Paul. I often think of deleting poems that failed to make the grade, except I like them too much myself. Does that make me an egocentric I wonder.

Jan Allison

December 22, 2016 at 1:30 PM

Very cleverly written Jean and great pic... I especially love the final line:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

December 22, 2016 at 3:07 PM

Thank you Jan.

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 20, 2016 at 2:21 AM

- Great, Jean - Luck in the contest - Merry Christmas to you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

December 20, 2016 at 4:27 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. Same to you.

Just James

December 19, 2016 at 1:51 PM

Case if opposites attract..hot and cold? loved your poem.

Jean Murray

December 19, 2016 at 3:51 PM

That's a strange thing isn't it James. My husband was attracted to me because I was everything he wasn't. Problems arose of course, when he then tried to mold me into his likeness.

Connie Marcum Wong

December 19, 2016 at 5:44 AM

I love your clever poem Jean. Brilliant! 7 ; )

Jean Murray

December 19, 2016 at 6:33 AM

Thank you Connie. I don't feel too clever these days. Christmas has never been a good time for me. This day next week 'twill all be over, and I'll be back in uniform. Hope you have a merry one.

Lim'Rik Flats

December 17, 2016 at 8:46 AM

Soon. or Soon? Jus kidd'n. Nice sun moon PO. Poor eternally frustrated lovers chasing each other around the cosmos. I always feel sorry for them. Huggadoodlenoodles! ~ j

Jean Murray

December 17, 2016 at 9:24 AM

I love your hugs John.

Moon Spoon

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