Moon Shot

Silver white,
Silver white,
Not chill, not distant
No second sight.
Ancient steel, platinum band,
Flickering pin pricks,
Long blue hand.
Call the living, sing the night,
Come one, come all.
Silver white
Silver white
Shadow, filigree and light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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October 10, 2025 at 7:19 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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October 19, 2020 at 6:24 AM
Vivid imagery... you captured it very well..
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