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Collum Lune - words (3/5/3) not syllables

Inspired by Sara Kendrick's poem (same form) "solid"

 

moon shine

marvelous moon shine pours onto a classy lass licks her lips
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 4:58 PM
creative
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 7:32 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Crandall Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 6:53 PM
It's a nice image, but I'm wondering if the lass licks her lips or the moonshine does. If that latter, that's pretty fresh!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 7:50 PM
However you see it! 😀
Hind Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 9:18 PM
a very beautiful image, Kim <3
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 5:36 AM
So appreciated ❤️
Rolland Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 4:11 PM
delicious haiku, emotion, thanks poet KIm
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 5:36 AM
Thank you, my friend ❤️
Poet Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 2:01 PM
This is an amazing Haiku, Kim. Your imagery and wording are excellent.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 5:35 AM
I appreciate you, Lasaad!
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 11:47 AM
- WoW ... marvelous :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 5:35 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise ❤️
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 10:53 AM
A glass with sass; I am in. xomo
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 5:34 AM
Love that ❤️🌹 Thank you, Maureen!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 10:50 AM
Your "moon shine"  is a fun write. I enjoyed reading. Have a fun day writing away..........
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 5:34 AM
✍️📖 Thank you, Paula!
Sharma  Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 10:02 AM
Gosh this is so magical and celestially sublime dear Kim! Love your word choices here and the last line feels sultry as well as enticing! Gorgeous moonlit imagery ~ loved reading your words today! 🥰💫💜💫 Sending you soothing sparkles and mermaid moonbeams 💫🧜‍♀️🌙🧜‍♀️💫
Empress Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 9:48 AM
This is so beautiful and has a sensuous touch to it too dear Kim! I absolutely love the way youv painted imagery and the last line is just stunning too. Absolutely loved reading you today. Sending you light always ~ Moonbeams and Starlight 🌙 💫
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 5:31 AM
Thank you, IE! xx hugs and blessings
Rodgers Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 9:04 AM
Dear Kim, lands like a single photograph on my camera: moonlight poured over a woman, the light finding the mouth. It’s tactile and a little dangerous, a private moment made visible. Loved It! Blessings, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 5:30 AM
Your comments delightfully highlight nuances of our poems! Thank you, Daniel!😀
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