Moon River

shimmered undulance moon's slow waltz as current leads... river gently dips

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/21/2015 1:20:00 PM

- Congratulation on your win, David - Reads with pleasure once more :) - I wish you a lovely weekend - // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 2/20/2015 11:10:00 PM

David, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for the support **SKAT LOVE**

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 7/3/2014 8:19:00 AM

An exquisite haiku, imaginative indeed. As a moon fan i luvd it. Pls do review my latest poem too.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/2/2014 5:56:00 PM

love the river -dance, david... amazing 'ku!... huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/2/2014 6:19:00 AM

- Beautiful and touching! - You're really good at haiku poem David! - (Hope you will like my last haiku :) - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/1/2014 3:55:00 PM

Moon river is a divine piece and moves me to tears every time I hear it. The poem is sublime I love the image of the waltz - a wonderful haiku. Jan xxx

David Mohn
Date: 7/2/2014 11:47:00 AM

Thanks so much Jan...I really love that song too