Moon River

shimmered undulance
moon's slow waltz as current leads...
river gently dips
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Andresen Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 1:20 PM
- Congratulation on your win, David - Reads with pleasure once more :) - I wish you a lovely weekend - // Anne-Lise :)
A  Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 11:10 PM
David, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for the support **SKAT LOVE**
Kamoonpuri Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 8:19 AM
An exquisite haiku, imaginative indeed. As a moon fan i luvd it. Pls do review my latest poem too.
Onclaud Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 5:56 PM
love the river -dance, david... amazing 'ku!... huggs
Andresen Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 6:19 AM
- Beautiful and touching! - You're really good at haiku poem David! - (Hope you will like my last haiku :) - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 3:55 PM
Moon river is a divine piece and moves me to tears every time I hear it. The poem is sublime I love the image of the waltz - a wonderful haiku. Jan xxx
Mohn Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 11:47 AM
Thanks so much Jan...I really love that song too
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