Moon Rising

Ocean rising--such silent splendor--
she stains a golden passage on the waves;
blushing not, though borrowed brilliance
is the only light she ever gave.
Lesser celestial lamps, bright retinue, 
honor her regal queenly estate;
yielding obeisance to her power,
seasons and tides bow at her gates.
Royally she rides the Milky Way,
stardust blithely trailing in her train;
lonely earth lovers, looking upward,
stabbed in their souls with longing pain.

Copyright, August 12, 2014
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Nance Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 5:21 PM
This is awesome, I love your imagery, your vocabulary blends nicely into the texture of your poem, (so I had to break out my dictionary, for retinue, obeisance, and blithely and I am not embaressed to say so) your poem was brilliant, grats on your first place :)
Haight Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 4:52 PM
Hi Faye -- I love your poem. So much imagery and so nicely written. Congratulations! Sandra
Onclaud Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 10:33 PM
how profound and deeply moving, faye.. love the mood!.. bestest congrats!
A. Sharma Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 11:35 PM
Exquisitely beautiful is ur write Faye! Congrats on big win!
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 8:13 PM
Seeing your brilliant personification poem again, Faye. congratulations to you. Soupmail.
Chutani Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 7:39 PM
a moon beauty, no comparison, royal, I take a bow before thee. Congrats, Faye. Mohan
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 4:49 PM
Prodigious winner..Way to go..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 4:21 PM
Congrad's on your win. Very well done! Light & Love
Merritt Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 3:05 PM
Faye, you have really captured the longing and romance of the Queen of Heaven here. I am happy you won ! Well-deserved !
Allison Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 1:36 PM
simply stunning many congratulations Faye:-) hugs Jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 1:00 PM
Congratulations Faye. It's amazing how the moon can hold us in her power and hypnotize us with her beauty as you just did me.
Roberts Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 12:47 PM
congrats on making the winners list in my contest Faye
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 3:18 PM
My, this is wonderful. Lilting and lovely.
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