Moon Rising

Frank had
a ranch in
Montana

he'd ride
his pygmy
pony as i

try to sing
along my
voice is 

a little hoarse
as i ride my
porcelain

horse
into
the

sun
set
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 1:17 PM
My brain went to some amusing places. Chuckles ~x
Connelly Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 2:05 PM
Awww that doesn't sound like an amusing place Maureen. This poem is a mix of Frank Zappa's "Montana" and a line from something I was watching on YouTube.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 7:34 AM
I don't know if I should share ;), ...reminded me of my roommate holding my hand at 2am, shortly after I was out of the hospital- the binding qualities of the pain meds.
Connelly Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 1:24 PM
Hahaha I'm proud my poem triggered these things Maureen. Care to share? (Seems I've submitted over the limit and so to Dickenson's character, no you can't have another lol. I've been writing all day with more on the way so I'll slip them in when I get the okay. Always a big THANKS Maureen for you reading and then commenting.
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