Moon Rise

Facing west Flaming gold descends Light extinguished She sleeps with Poseidon Phoebe rises from Poseidon's seat Silver light on Erebus' shadow Rebirth promise of beginnings Herald of the dawn

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 1/10/2015 11:49:00 AM

Shane, this is such a beautiful tribute honoring lovely Moon! I love it! Best wishes. Pandita.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/29/2014 6:59:00 PM

Shane your imagery is sublime you paint such vivid pictures with so few words:-) Hugs Jan xx Have added you as a favourite poet so can pop by and read more:-) Hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 12/29/2014 7:24:00 PM

you should get him to join and write collaboratively. i had a writing partner I met on here but sadly he is ill and we've not written together in months - check out Jadazzle united - my comment on your other poem was about missing him:-( hugs jan x

Shane Cooper
Date: 12/29/2014 7:07:00 PM

Thanks. I was creating alternate stanza's with a friend in New Zealand as i drove to work early one morning, he is very talented. the verse above is my part. i had alread added you as my favourite poet. Hugs Shane <3 xx