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Moon Prayer

The moon that graces evening skies Has shone on those who’ve walked before And in the glimmer of its glow I almost see them walk once more I find that we’ve not changed at all Aside from fashion trends and such As lovers still walk in the park And babies coo at mother’s touch And though I’d like to say we’ve learned I see no evidence of that As tongues still wag and disapprove Of those with whom we’ve never sat And so dear moon, if you could try To shine the lessons of the past Perhaps we’ll see how we can live And light the world in love held fast

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/15/2020 12:32:00 AM
Bravo, Mike. This is a beauty. A FAVE for me. Your title hooked me and your poem did not disappoint.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/15/2020 6:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Line, I am so happy that you liked it xxoo
Date: 9/23/2019 7:31:00 PM
Hello Mike Gentle, oh this poem is beautifully created. I like it.have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/24/2019 1:45:00 PM
Hello Mike, things are better now. My sister had surgery for lung cancer,and she was in for 5 days. She is home now. Home care will be coming her for awhile. My sister is doing alright now. Slowly she will get stronger. Have a nice day my friend.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/24/2019 1:35:00 PM
So nice of you to comment Darlene, Hope you are well and thanks as always xxoo
Date: 8/24/2019 3:55:00 AM
Wow awesomely said in superb rhyming and flow. We haven't changed much in many ways yeahh. We have only devolved in some ways . Kudos for this great poem under the moon and as a moon lover I love the moonlit framework. Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/24/2019 8:55:00 AM
Thanks so much, I really appreciate your visit and kind comments!!
Date: 8/15/2019 11:01:00 AM
A wonderful prayer, Mike! May it be so; we can improve,...and make the moon proud! Best wishes, my friend. Happy Thursday! ~ gw
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/16/2019 1:57:00 PM
Thanks so much GW, or Wolf Man! Happy Friday now!!!
Date: 8/1/2019 9:48:00 AM
Hi Mike, Well constructed and a unique use of the moon. I particularly like the last stanza. A fav for me ~ Warren
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/1/2019 1:31:00 PM
Thanks so much Warren!! I am glad you liked it and flattered that it was a fav for you!
Date: 8/1/2019 7:11:00 AM
... lovely written from your heart, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/1/2019 8:33:00 AM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise, Happy Thursday xxoo
Date: 8/1/2019 7:00:00 AM
Lovely sentiment, Mike! How funny it is that we live for such a short time on this earth but the sun and moon have always watched the changing of the guard.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/1/2019 8:32:00 AM
Yes it sure is, Thanks so much Kim xxoo
Date: 7/31/2019 6:07:00 PM
Hello Mike Gentile, I love this poem. I like the way the words flow. It is the last verse i like the best. Have a nice evening my friend. xxxxxxx-oooooo.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/1/2019 6:27:00 AM
Hello Darlene!!, Thank so much for your kind comments xxoo

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