Moon Prayer

The moon that graces evening skies
     Has shone on those who’ve walked before 
And in the glimmer of its glow
               I almost see them walk once more 

I find that we’ve not changed at all
              Aside from fashion trends and such
As lovers still walk in the park
                 And babies coo at mother’s touch 

And though I’d like to say we’ve learned 
                             I see no evidence of that 
As tongues still wag and disapprove 
            Of those with whom we’ve never sat

And so dear moon, if you could try
                   To shine the lessons of the past
Perhaps we’ll see how we can live 
             And light the world in love held fast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 12:32 AM
Bravo, Mike. This is a beauty. A FAVE for me. Your title hooked me and your poem did not disappoint.
Gentile Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 6:23 AM
Thank you so much Line, I am so happy that you liked it xxoo
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 7:31 PM
Hello Mike Gentle, oh this poem is beautifully created. I like it.have a nice evening my friend.
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September 24, 2019 at 1:45 PM
Hello Mike, things are better now. My sister had surgery for lung cancer,and she was in for 5 days. She is home now. Home care will be coming her for awhile. My sister is doing alright now. Slowly she will get stronger. Have a nice day my friend.
Gentile Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:35 PM
So nice of you to comment Darlene, Hope you are well and thanks as always xxoo
Kamoonpuri Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 3:55 AM
Wow awesomely said in superb rhyming and flow. We haven't changed much in many ways yeahh. We have only devolved in some ways . Kudos for this great poem under the moon and as a moon lover I love the moonlit framework. Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.
Gentile Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 8:55 AM
Thanks so much, I really appreciate your visit and kind comments!!
Wolf Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 11:01 AM
A wonderful prayer, Mike! May it be so; we can improve,...and make the moon proud! Best wishes, my friend. Happy Thursday! ~ gw
Gentile Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 1:57 PM
Thanks so much GW, or Wolf Man! Happy Friday now!!!
Doll Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 9:48 AM
Hi Mike, Well constructed and a unique use of the moon. I particularly like the last stanza. A fav for me ~ Warren
Gentile Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 1:31 PM
Thanks so much Warren!! I am glad you liked it and flattered that it was a fav for you!
Andresen Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 7:11 AM
... lovely written from your heart, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentile Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 8:33 AM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise, Happy Thursday xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 7:00 AM
Lovely sentiment, Mike! How funny it is that we live for such a short time on this earth but the sun and moon have always watched the changing of the guard.
Gentile Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 8:32 AM
Yes it sure is, Thanks so much Kim xxoo
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 6:07 PM
Hello Mike Gentile, I love this poem. I like the way the words flow. It is the last verse i like the best. Have a nice evening my friend. xxxxxxx-oooooo.
Gentile Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 6:27 AM
Hello Darlene!!, Thank so much for your kind comments xxoo
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