Moon Over Mars

a sliver of moon
glows above the Red Planet
this cloudless spring night

Submitted for Skat’s Moon contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Makama Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 7:16 AM
Awesome and refreshing. A jaw breaking 7.
Devnath  Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 3:00 PM
Congratulation my lovely friend on your win. It's an excellent poem read from you. Loved always, bl
Gentry Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 2:14 AM
Congratulations on win with this great haiku!
A. Sharma Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 4:25 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Tim!
A  Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:43 PM
Tim, Congrats on your win............ Luv ** SKAT **
Shahein Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 6:30 PM
Beautiful imagery , beautiful write my friend best of luck in the contest, hugs / / :) dalia
Callus Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 6:26 AM
A delightful sight watching the moon take pride of place in a cloudless sky, Tim! gl in the contest. // paul
A   Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 11:12 PM
A silver moon, love the imagery. LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 8:33 PM
Very nice one, Tim! I bet she gets a lot of great moon poems!
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