Richard I. Poet Rhyme

Moon on the Water

Moon on the water
Cant let you see
What becomes of me
Moon shimmers on snow
Too proud to let go
Out of sight, not out of mind
Remember when you were mine

Moon on the water
Cant let you see
What becomes of me
Moon shimmers on snow
Too hurt to let know
Out of sight, not out of mind
Remember when you were mine

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rhaya artlyy September 18, 2026 at 8:53 AM I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly