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Moon Love

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O lonely blue moon, shine a bit for me. Come yellow moon, shine brightly so I'll see I wander here and there aimlessly. Search for my dear one to love faithfully. She would not tolerate my advances. She will never accept my mischances. I was so foolish not to treat her well. How I miss her, only the Lord can tell. Come, sweet Lord, shine brightly so I'll see, And take her for a ride along the quay. We will make up; only the Lord can tell. I must beg her pardon and feel my heart swell.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/21/2024 9:22:00 AM

Dear Victor, your poignant pen spills with the ache of romantic longing and remorse. You verse is filled with bittersweet poetic expression. Your want for her heart's forgiveness and your heart's mend is deeply moving. Splendid poetry! Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan

Deb M

Date: 11/20/2024 10:16:00 AM

Beautifully sad Victor! Debx

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/20/2024 9:27:00 AM

Enjoyed the wistful read Victor, we all have our regrets, but should dwell on memories that were made of the very best… Beryl

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/18/2024 4:07:00 PM

hoping is precious, this is a melodious song to hear and read, thanks Victor

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/18/2024 10:41:00 AM

She is probably waiting for you on the other side with a cup of hot in her hands, :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/18/2024 5:05:00 AM

This is also a sad piece, much like my recent one. Thank you for your visit to my page. Hope brighter days are ahead.... or, blessed moonlit nights. Blessings

Maria Williams

Date: 11/18/2024 3:32:00 AM

Dear Victor, this is a touchingly romantic reflection from a romantic soul like yourself. We all, men and women alike have those moments where we lament on what we could have or should have done. You are not alone then all becomes wonderful again and the heart of glass is healed. How many times have we sent up a silent request to the moon. I love it. A fave for me - Hugs Maria

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/17/2024 10:02:00 PM

Sweet and beautiful thoughts on romance, under the moon! I enjoyed reading this gem, Victor. :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/17/2024 6:11:00 PM

This is a lovely poem. The moon gives a subtle backdrop to romance. A very good job of writing.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 11/17/2024 3:22:00 PM

DearVictor, ohh how you beautifully capture the longing and regret of lost love. Your wonderful imagery of the moon and your heartfelt reflections on faith and forgiveness just filled my heart. I appreciate how you convey such raw emotion through your words. Thank you for sharing this poignant piece; it truly touched my soul. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2024 12:01:00 PM

This is so sweet, Victor. Also, glad to know you are crazy for popcorn.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/17/2024 11:15:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your powerful "Moon Love" write. Saying with feelings "I am sorry" can go along way. Prayer can help. Great Picture... Have a blessed day writing away.................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/17/2024 10:41:00 AM

Always a romantic! Looking for the opportunities to meet back up with love. xx

Paige Hind

Date: 11/17/2024 8:38:00 AM

Lovely writing, Victor- very romantic

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/17/2024 8:29:00 AM

Fabulous verse venture into visions of yearning, remorse, and the wish for warmth. You yearn for lost love, lamenting lingering mistakes, and longing for a lovely opportunity to amend the past.

Joe Dimino

Date: 11/17/2024 7:45:00 AM

Hi Victor; always more we could have said, should have said. You know what is said of Hindsight. But what love has been given, is never lost, though deeply planted perhaps in the firmament of time. Love seeded, will almost always green and blossom, a greater harvest to bless this earth.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2024 6:34:00 AM

- Beautiful ... from the heart, Victor :) - hugs

Michael Tor

Date: 11/17/2024 6:07:00 AM

Such a special women Victor. God believes in second chances. Lovely piece my friend...

John Read

Date: 11/17/2024 3:00:00 AM

Hopefully your prayers will be answered Victor, enjoyed reading your poem of love.