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Moon In Sun

Is sunset But don’t lose hope That the sun is going down Leaving your skin scaly with scars and spots All for a while The moon is coming up Even with stars Is night time The cloud has covered the moon Leaving you with no traces of the stars Remember, is sun rising Softly it comes with nutrients for your skin And the cloud will be gone Is it forever?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/23/2012 2:05:00 PM
very nice poem, i like the rhetorical question and i think that depends for person to person to be forever or not
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Date: 6/2/2012 8:50:00 AM
When I read this, I think of the golden age of our life where we grow old physically and wait for the eternal time to bring us back to youth. Take care. Janet
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Fisayo Aderounmu
Date: 6/29/2012 2:05:00 PM
Quite funny, Janet. Cheers.
Date: 6/2/2012 6:02:00 AM
Deeply said!!! Love it!!!
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Fisayo Aderounmu
Date: 6/29/2012 2:08:00 PM
Thanks Pace.

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