Moon In Sun

Is sunset
But don’t lose hope
That the sun is going down
Leaving your skin scaly with 
scars and spots
All for a while
The moon is coming up
Even with stars
Is night time
The cloud has covered the 
moon
Leaving you with no traces 
of the stars
Remember, is sun rising
Softly it comes with nutrients 
for your skin
And the cloud will be gone
Is it forever?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Maria Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 2:05 PM
very nice poem, i like the rhetorical question and i think that depends for person to person to be forever or not
Vick Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 8:50 AM
When I read this, I think of the golden age of our life where we grow old physically and wait for the eternal time to bring us back to youth. Take care. Janet
Aderounmu Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 2:05 PM
Quite funny, Janet. Cheers.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 6:02 AM
Deeply said!!! Love it!!!
Aderounmu Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 2:08 PM
Thanks Pace.
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