Moon Hiku 35

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Placed First in : 1393 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand

Moon Hiku 35 t s t h e n u s o k night`s orb m y casts shadows l y~ o h n s g a n d lovers` a -p -p -l -e of e~y~e~s.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2025 2:39:00 PM

Congrats on your win

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/2/2025 8:50:00 AM

You said many great thoughts with creativity and profound metaphors in just a few syllables. Congratulations on your win, my friend.

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 7/3/2025 1:21:00 PM

Thank you dear poet for appreciating the write and your kind wishes, which mean a lot to me. Wishing you a bright day .

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/24/2025 3:00:00 PM

Very well crafted haiku, with wonderful metaphor layers and great diction. Best for a win

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/25/2025 11:24:00 AM

Thank poet friend for appreciating the above write and for your kind wishes. Still not yet judged.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2025 12:38:00 PM

Very lovely and creative.

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/27/2025 12:42:00 AM

It would seem that I had posted the haiku on PS, but forgotten to enter it in the contest. Thanks again for your comments.

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/25/2025 11:29:00 AM

Thank you dear poetess for appreciating the write. It is fun writing and crafting some design while ensuring clarity and ease of reading. Yet to be judged.