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Moon Hiku 35

                                 Moon Hiku 35

                                               
                                t    s      t   h   e       
                            n                            
                         u                                s    
                      o                                     k  
night`s  orb   m                                        y                                      
                                                                 
casts shadows l                                         y~
                         o                                  h                                          
                               n                         s                           
                                   g     a   n   d                                                                                        

                lovers` a -p -p -l -e   of  e~y~e~s.
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Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 2:39 PM
Congrats on your win
Poet Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 8:50 AM
You said many great thoughts with creativity and profound metaphors in just a few syllables. Congratulations on your win, my friend.
Guptar Avatar
July 3, 2025 at 1:21 PM
Thank you dear poet for appreciating the write and your kind wishes, which mean a lot to me. Wishing you a bright day .
Poet Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 3:00 PM
Very well crafted haiku, with wonderful metaphor layers and great diction. Best for a win
Guptar Avatar
June 25, 2025 at 11:24 AM
Thank poet friend for appreciating the above write and for your kind wishes. Still not yet judged.
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 12:38 PM
Very lovely and creative.
Guptar Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 12:42 AM
It would seem that I had posted the haiku on PS, but forgotten to enter it in the contest. Thanks again for your comments.
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June 25, 2025 at 11:29 AM
Thank you dear poetess for appreciating the write. It is fun writing and crafting some design while ensuring clarity and ease of reading. Yet to be judged.
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