Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Haiku

Moon Glistens

uncanny hushed night
                        somber nebulous dark sky
                                moon ~ a strip ~ glistens



                   

                                       August 14, 2021
                  A Brian Strand 1,2,3,4,5 Lines Poetry Contest
                            Syllables (5-7-5)checked by HMS
                                         FIRST PLACE

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Joanna Daniel August 16, 2021 at 11:02 PM Enjoyed this one absolutely, Mala, congratulations:) Malabika Ray Choudhury August 17, 2021 at 1:50 AM Thanks, Jo. Haiku is a great form - opportunity of saying a lot in few words!

Andrea Dietrich August 16, 2021 at 2:47 PM oh wow, that last line is so special! Congrats for your win. Malabika Ray Choudhury August 16, 2021 at 2:57 PM Thanks, Andrea. Haiku is a great form.

Anitha Jayasankar August 16, 2021 at 10:24 AM Lovely Haiku dear sweet friend... Congrats on your win... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Darlene De Beaulieu August 15, 2021 at 11:42 AM Hello Mala, I enjoyed this imagery. Friendship & love, Darlene.

Supraja Kannan August 15, 2021 at 7:58 AM Beautiful!!! Great imagery... Malabika Ray Choudhury August 15, 2021 at 8:25 AM Thanks, Supraja. Love writing haiku! Glad you enjoyed!

Darlene De Beaulieu August 15, 2021 at 7:10 AM Hello mala, a beautiful scene. love & Friendship. Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu August 15, 2021 at 10:29 AM Hello Mala, yes i enjoyed this poem. Love & Friendship. Darlene Malabika Ray Choudhury August 15, 2021 at 8:24 AM Thanks, Darlene. Glad you liked.