Moon Glistens

uncanny hushed night somber nebulous dark sky moon ~ a strip ~ glistens August 14, 2021 A Brian Strand 1,2,3,4,5 Lines Poetry Contest Syllables (5-7-5)checked by HMS FIRST PLACE

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/16/2021 11:02:00 PM

Enjoyed this one absolutely, Mala, congratulations:)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/17/2021 1:50:00 AM

Thanks, Jo. Haiku is a great form - opportunity of saying a lot in few words!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2021 2:47:00 PM

oh wow, that last line is so special! Congrats for your win.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/16/2021 2:57:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Haiku is a great form.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 8/16/2021 10:24:00 AM

Lovely Haiku dear sweet friend... Congrats on your win... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/15/2021 11:42:00 AM

Hello Mala, I enjoyed this imagery. Friendship & love, Darlene.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 8/15/2021 7:58:00 AM

Beautiful!!! Great imagery...

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/15/2021 8:25:00 AM

Thanks, Supraja. Love writing haiku! Glad you enjoyed!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/15/2021 7:10:00 AM

Hello mala, a beautiful scene. love & Friendship. Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/15/2021 10:29:00 AM

Hello Mala, yes i enjoyed this poem. Love & Friendship. Darlene

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/15/2021 8:24:00 AM

Thanks, Darlene. Glad you liked.