Moon Flizzens Round Face

moon flizzens round face
                            sea mermaids are singing blues
                                    sprayed into the air
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Petersen Potter Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 8:07 PM
Hello Rajat! Very nice pen! I enjoyed your haiku very much, my dearest friend. A 7 from me! Have a lovely day! In His Light! :)Love n hugs! xxx D.
Kiser Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 5:04 PM
You're on a roll with these Haiku's...I love this.
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 11:54 PM
Love ML. God bless
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 11:53 PM
Love ML. God bless
Roper Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 9:36 AM
I can just see the mermaids singing. Love the Haiku, Rajat. Blessings dear friend Eve
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 9:49 AM
Love Eve.God bless.
Kendrick Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 8:34 AM
Cute one..Enjoyed reading this one..That would be a picture to see..Thanks for the visit to my page..All restraints will be lifted when in heaven we reside if the music so inspires us we can dance and dance awhile..Sara
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 9:50 AM
Lovely comments Sara. So sweet. Love>rajat
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