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Moon Face

Shine down
Mother moon
so high
in the sky
watching

silently
shield me
from nightmares
and beasts

you frighten
these ghouls
as I sleep

I wake
and behold 

your moon face

Syllables Per Line:	2 3 2 3 2 3 2 3 2 3 2 3 2 3 3
Total # Syllables:	38
Total # Lines:	        15

SECOND PLACE
Contest Charlieku New Form
Sponsor: Charles Messina


Contest Brian's Choice K
Sponsor Brian Strand 
2nd PLACE

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Panagiota Romios Date: 6/1/2019 7:47:00 PM Congratulations! Ann, Well done,,,, Panagiota xoxo Login to Reply Ann Gilmour Date: 6/2/2019 12:27:00 AM Many thanks Panagiota for your congrats! With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Eve Roper Date: 5/26/2019 10:16:00 PM Wonderful verse, Ann, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Ann Gilmour Date: 5/27/2019 10:28:00 AM Many thanks Eve for your lovely comments and hugs, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Charles Messina Date: 5/25/2019 8:49:00 PM I can picture waking up to the moon's face. A lovely poem, Ann. Congrats on your win. ~Charlie :) Login to Reply Ann Gilmour Date: 5/26/2019 7:34:00 AM Thank you so much Charlie for my win in your contest and your lovely comments. I always enjoy the challenge of your contests and thank you for sponsoring them. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/25/2019 1:30:00 PM - Congratulations on your great suggestions, Ann :) ... a fun contest :) - // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Ann Gilmour Date: 5/26/2019 7:36:00 AM Many thanks Anne-Lise for your visit and I hope you and your sweet dogs are well. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger Date: 5/11/2019 2:27:00 AM Ann, you have done a marvelous job on this new CharlieKu form. I liked it so much, I was grateful that you added the pattern, so I could see what it is. Wow! A darling write, and so true. The moon is like a favorite relative that gives us hope in the spookiest times. Login to Reply Ann Gilmour Date: 5/11/2019 3:39:00 PM Oh so true dear Caren, and thank you for your most wonderful comments, I truly appreciate them! With kindest thoughts Ann xx