Ann Gilmour Poet Verse

Moon Face

Shine down
Mother moon
so high
in the sky
watching

silently
shield me
from nightmares
and beasts

you frighten
these ghouls
as I sleep

I wake
and behold 

your moon face

Syllables Per Line:	2 3 2 3 2 3 2 3 2 3 2 3 2 3 3
Total # Syllables:	38
Total # Lines:	        15

SECOND PLACE
Contest Charlieku New Form
Sponsor: Charles Messina


Contest Brian's Choice K
Sponsor Brian Strand 
2nd PLACE

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Panagiota Romios June 1, 2019 at 7:47 PM Congratulations! Ann, Well done,,,, Panagiota xoxo Ann Gilmour June 2, 2019 at 12:27 AM Many thanks Panagiota for your congrats! With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Eve Roper May 26, 2019 at 10:16 PM Wonderful verse, Ann, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Ann Gilmour May 27, 2019 at 10:28 AM Many thanks Eve for your lovely comments and hugs, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Charles Messina May 25, 2019 at 8:49 PM I can picture waking up to the moon's face. A lovely poem, Ann. Congrats on your win. ~Charlie :) Ann Gilmour May 26, 2019 at 7:34 AM Thank you so much Charlie for my win in your contest and your lovely comments. I always enjoy the challenge of your contests and thank you for sponsoring them. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Anne-Lise Andresen May 25, 2019 at 1:30 PM - Congratulations on your great suggestions, Ann :) ... a fun contest :) - // Anne-Lise :) Ann Gilmour May 26, 2019 at 7:36 AM Many thanks Anne-Lise for your visit and I hope you and your sweet dogs are well. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger May 11, 2019 at 2:27 AM Ann, you have done a marvelous job on this new CharlieKu form. I liked it so much, I was grateful that you added the pattern, so I could see what it is. Wow! A darling write, and so true. The moon is like a favorite relative that gives us hope in the spookiest times. Ann Gilmour May 11, 2019 at 3:39 PM Oh so true dear Caren, and thank you for your most wonderful comments, I truly appreciate them! With kindest thoughts Ann xx