Moon Face

Shine down Mother moon so high in the sky watching silently shield me from nightmares and beasts you frighten these ghouls as I sleep I wake and behold your moon face Syllables Per Line: 2 3 2 3 2 3 2 3 2 3 2 3 2 3 3 Total # Syllables: 38 Total # Lines: 15 SECOND PLACE Contest Charlieku New Form Sponsor: Charles Messina Contest Brian's Choice K Sponsor Brian Strand 2nd PLACE

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/1/2019 7:47:00 PM

Congratulations! Ann, Well done,,,, Panagiota xoxo

Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/2/2019 12:27:00 AM

Many thanks Panagiota for your congrats! With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Eve Roper

Date: 5/26/2019 10:16:00 PM

Wonderful verse, Ann, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/27/2019 10:28:00 AM

Many thanks Eve for your lovely comments and hugs, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Charles Messina

Date: 5/25/2019 8:49:00 PM

I can picture waking up to the moon's face. A lovely poem, Ann. Congrats on your win. ~Charlie :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/26/2019 7:34:00 AM

Thank you so much Charlie for my win in your contest and your lovely comments. I always enjoy the challenge of your contests and thank you for sponsoring them. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/25/2019 1:30:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great suggestions, Ann :) ... a fun contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/26/2019 7:36:00 AM

Many thanks Anne-Lise for your visit and I hope you and your sweet dogs are well. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/11/2019 2:27:00 AM

Ann, you have done a marvelous job on this new CharlieKu form. I liked it so much, I was grateful that you added the pattern, so I could see what it is. Wow! A darling write, and so true. The moon is like a favorite relative that gives us hope in the spookiest times.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/11/2019 3:39:00 PM

Oh so true dear Caren, and thank you for your most wonderful comments, I truly appreciate them! With kindest thoughts Ann xx