Moon Fables

whispering low tides
              lunar fables washed ashore 
                      articulate waves  




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For Rauls "reflections" contest!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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A  Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 7:30 PM
amazing
Guzzi Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 5:25 PM
loved the last line a great conclusion! Light & Love
Jordan Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 6:59 PM
Abe - - Congratulations on your success in Raul’s contest, wonderful job with this poetic challenge – God Bless, mj
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 2:34 AM
Congratulations Abe, on your success in Raul’s Reflections contest with this very descriptive and beautiful poem. Your poetic skills shine in this one. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Richards Avatar
December 11, 2009 at 8:17 PM
Look who made it to the top of the Hot Poems!! :) Congratulations Abe!!!
Burton Avatar
December 11, 2009 at 10:15 AM
Short and beautiful pice of poetry, congrats on ya spot on the charts as well. Have a great day. :):)
Nutter Avatar
December 11, 2009 at 2:34 AM
A sure winner congratulations on making the hot list.
Harper Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 1:09 PM
i like the low tides thing
Harper Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 1:08 PM
dude congratz on ur win!
Goombi Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 12:53 PM
Great haiku, loved it. CG
Mckee Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 12:12 PM
nice one !!!!
Martin Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 12:02 PM
Congrats on your win. TM
Bilyeu Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 8:08 AM
I ddn't realize that you placed!!! great job!!!
Bilyeu Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 8:04 AM
I've always wished to see the ocean. This is a great discription!!! lovely!!!
Perez Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 7:59 AM
soupmail.
Neal Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 11:39 PM
Amazing words describing that wonderful photo. DN
Neal Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 11:26 PM
Congrats on your win in Raul's contest.
Autaubo Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 11:15 AM
i wonder wat inspired u to write zis poem? very, very rightous indeed ur an awesome poet:)(:
Neese Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 9:04 AM
this poem is just a taste of coolness wish i coulda seen the pic that inspired you to write it. ya buddy walker
Perez Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 7:57 AM
lovely haiku Mr.L nice job placing
Kurth Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 6:15 AM
wonderfully evocative haiku Abe. I grew up on the ocean and your poem immediately brought a clear beautiful image of moon bathed tidal flats with ripples in the sand! Thanks for commenting on my winter poem. All the best, Krista
Edmonds Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 11:05 AM
Congrats on your placement.
Moreno Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 12:34 AM
Your poem is making up the hot list like a rocket...Raul
Delacroix Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 10:58 PM
WOW! Beautiful Haiku! Awesome imagery! Very creative works of the pen. Inspiring. Good luck on the contest. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poems.
Lovin Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 12:26 PM
dude thats awesome i love it so much your my idol!elovin
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