Moon Fables

whispering low tides
              lunar fables washed ashore 
                      articulate waves  




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For Rauls "reflections" contest!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/13/2015 7:30:00 PM
amazing
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Date: 2/6/2010 5:25:00 PM
loved the last line a great conclusion! Light & Love
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Date: 12/23/2009 6:59:00 PM
Abe - - Congratulations on your success in Raul’s contest, wonderful job with this poetic challenge – God Bless, mj
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Date: 12/19/2009 2:34:00 AM
Congratulations Abe, on your success in Raul’s Reflections contest with this very descriptive and beautiful poem. Your poetic skills shine in this one. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/11/2009 8:17:00 PM
Look who made it to the top of the Hot Poems!! :) Congratulations Abe!!!
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Date: 12/11/2009 10:15:00 AM
Short and beautiful pice of poetry, congrats on ya spot on the charts as well. Have a great day. :):)
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Date: 12/11/2009 2:34:00 AM
A sure winner congratulations on making the hot list.
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Date: 12/10/2009 1:09:00 PM
i like the low tides thing
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Date: 12/10/2009 1:08:00 PM
dude congratz on ur win!
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Date: 12/10/2009 12:53:00 PM
Great haiku, loved it. CG
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Date: 12/10/2009 12:12:00 PM
nice one !!!!
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Date: 12/10/2009 12:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win. TM
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Date: 12/10/2009 8:08:00 AM
I ddn't realize that you placed!!! great job!!!
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Date: 12/10/2009 8:04:00 AM
I've always wished to see the ocean. This is a great discription!!! lovely!!!
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Date: 12/10/2009 7:59:00 AM
soupmail.
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Date: 12/9/2009 11:39:00 PM
Amazing words describing that wonderful photo. DN
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Date: 12/9/2009 11:26:00 PM
Congrats on your win in Raul's contest.
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Date: 12/9/2009 11:15:00 AM
i wonder wat inspired u to write zis poem? very, very rightous indeed ur an awesome poet:)(:
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Date: 12/9/2009 9:04:00 AM
this poem is just a taste of coolness wish i coulda seen the pic that inspired you to write it. ya buddy walker
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Date: 12/9/2009 7:57:00 AM
lovely haiku Mr.L nice job placing
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Date: 12/9/2009 6:15:00 AM
wonderfully evocative haiku Abe. I grew up on the ocean and your poem immediately brought a clear beautiful image of moon bathed tidal flats with ripples in the sand! Thanks for commenting on my winter poem. All the best, Krista
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Date: 12/8/2009 11:05:00 AM
Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 12/8/2009 12:34:00 AM
Your poem is making up the hot list like a rocket...Raul
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Date: 12/7/2009 10:58:00 PM
WOW! Beautiful Haiku! Awesome imagery! Very creative works of the pen. Inspiring. Good luck on the contest. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poems.
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Date: 12/7/2009 12:26:00 PM
dude thats awesome i love it so much your my idol!elovin
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