Moon Dance

A coy moon glides in a lively Viennese waltz Across a sky of billowing petticoat clouds A flowing, triple time, closed step, pausing halt. A ballerina basking in the glow of appreciative crowds.

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/28/2014 3:38:00 PM

incredible imagery I LOVE this poem! hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/28/2014 5:24:00 PM

I'm in the Isle of Man :-) was only in Dublin at the beginning of May superb place and the people oh so friendly. Hugs Jan xxxx

Joe Murphy
Date: 5/28/2014 4:41:00 PM

Thank you. As a Dubliner, I appreciate the way you cleverly combine humor and content in your work. Nicely done. Would love your input on my Sopranos Shakespeare in Eden poem.