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Moon

ole moon competes for honor, the ladies hand is still, she says i don't really wanna, no love for you instill, the night with darkness fills:(

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/12/2012 11:52:00 PM
Oh Don this is sad, very clever but also very sad!HugsLizie
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Date: 3/12/2012 10:09:00 PM
Hey, we don't want the darkness to fill us! What a wonderful write you have here Don! The best light is the line, "the night with darkness fills:(" that line bring up the depression from your poem! May be depressing but it's a very good poem nonetheless! Your write is awesome, I love it! Excellent Work!!
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