Moon

ole moon competes for honor,
the ladies hand is still,
she says i don't really wanna,
no love for you instill,
the night with darkness fills:(
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 12, 2012 at 11:52 PM
Oh Don this is sad, very clever but also very sad!HugsLizie
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March 12, 2012 at 10:09 PM
Hey, we don't want the darkness to fill us! What a wonderful write you have here Don! The best light is the line, "the night with darkness fills:(" that line bring up the depression from your poem! May be depressing but it's a very good poem nonetheless! Your write is awesome, I love it! Excellent Work!!
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