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Moon

* Moon Light my Way, it is So dark From were I come, and When the Nights are Gray, I will Over come My fears Subside Into the Nights Moon. * -Miranda Lambert-

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Lisa Cooper

Date: 3/20/2011 3:39:00 PM

great read. very creative

John Loving Iii

Date: 3/17/2011 7:51:00 PM

good work on the shape. john

Wandering Butterfly

Date: 3/17/2011 8:00:00 AM

IT was a little hard to arrange not going to lie...lol...but I wasn't giving up till i got it just right...thanks for noticing Robb, Love Randa

Robb A. Kopp

Date: 3/16/2011 8:47:00 PM

fun moon....was it hard to arrange?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/12/2011 7:17:00 PM

Oh so lovely Miranda.. a perfect crest of the moon and elegant words to compliment it.. appreciate your most gracious comment on my contest entry luv.. glad u enjoyed my story ..good luck with your contest and if u need any assistance please ask the "Sweetheart".. glad to help out...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/12/2011 2:45:00 AM

i'm struck.. i love the moon and this was a delight to feel and see... wonderful stuff, miranda.. :) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/11/2011 4:37:00 PM

What a cool shape you came up with, Miranda. Nice, peaceful message as well. And I like the little star you placed beneath the moon! Very creative. Regarding your contest, the dictionary defines burlesque as a satire or spoof on something. I didn't see the movie you mentioned, but are you looking for poems on burlesque shows? Love, Carolyn

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/10/2011 6:37:00 PM

Outstanding shape, Miranda. Cleverly done and excellent wording. Kudos to you. Thanks for your gracious comments. Luv Ralph