Wandering Butterfly Poet Shape

Moon

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                                                      Moon
                                                Light my
                                              Way, it is
                                             So  dark
                                         From were
                                       I come, and
                                      When    the
                                      Nights   are
                                        Gray, I will
                                         Over come
                                           My  fears
                                             Subside
                                               Into the
                                                 Nights
                                                      Moon.
                                                              *
-Miranda Lambert-

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Lisa Cooper March 20, 2011 at 3:39 PM great read. very creative

John Loving Iii March 17, 2011 at 7:51 PM good work on the shape. john

Wandering Butterfly March 17, 2011 at 8:00 AM IT was a little hard to arrange not going to lie...lol...but I wasn't giving up till i got it just right...thanks for noticing Robb, Love Randa

Robb A. Kopp March 16, 2011 at 8:47 PM fun moon....was it hard to arrange?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 12, 2011 at 7:17 PM Oh so lovely Miranda.. a perfect crest of the moon and elegant words to compliment it.. appreciate your most gracious comment on my contest entry luv.. glad u enjoyed my story ..good luck with your contest and if u need any assistance please ask the "Sweetheart".. glad to help out...

Nette Onclaud March 12, 2011 at 2:45 AM i'm struck.. i love the moon and this was a delight to feel and see... wonderful stuff, miranda.. :) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire March 11, 2011 at 4:37 PM What a cool shape you came up with, Miranda. Nice, peaceful message as well. And I like the little star you placed beneath the moon! Very creative. Regarding your contest, the dictionary defines burlesque as a satire or spoof on something. I didn't see the movie you mentioned, but are you looking for poems on burlesque shows? Love, Carolyn

Ralph Taylor March 10, 2011 at 6:37 PM Outstanding shape, Miranda. Cleverly done and excellent wording. Kudos to you. Thanks for your gracious comments. Luv Ralph