Moon

The moon on the lake
mirrors the one in the sky
they both bring a smile
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rolland Avatar
February 27, 2024 at 3:14 PM
nicely done, Jerry, kind of moving show i always enjoy, cause life is short
Brotherton Avatar
February 28, 2024 at 6:32 PM
Thanks, Yann.
Sands Avatar
February 27, 2024 at 11:53 AM
I can see this beautiful sight. Well written. Thanks for sharing, my friend :)
Brotherton Avatar
February 28, 2024 at 6:32 PM
Thank you Heidi.
Cunningham Avatar
February 26, 2024 at 10:18 PM
You create a beautiful image in your haiku Jerry. I've seen it many times like that at sea. Tom
Brotherton Avatar
February 28, 2024 at 6:30 PM
No need for giant lights and fireworks displays when you have a full moon and a sky full of stars.
Hinshaw Avatar
February 26, 2024 at 6:32 PM
Splendid Haiku, Jerry! I am enjoying a full moon here tonite casting its mellow glow on snow-covered Pikes Peak! Bob H
Brotherton Avatar
February 28, 2024 at 6:28 PM
Thanks Bob. I think they called this one the snow moon.
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