Moon

The moon on the lake mirrors the one in the sky they both bring a smile

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Yann Rolland

Date: 2/27/2024 3:14:00 PM

nicely done, Jerry, kind of moving show i always enjoy, cause life is short

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/28/2024 6:32:00 PM

Thanks, Yann.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/27/2024 11:53:00 AM

I can see this beautiful sight. Well written. Thanks for sharing, my friend :)

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/28/2024 6:32:00 PM

Thank you Heidi.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/26/2024 10:18:00 PM

You create a beautiful image in your haiku Jerry. I've seen it many times like that at sea. Tom

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/28/2024 6:30:00 PM

No need for giant lights and fireworks displays when you have a full moon and a sky full of stars.

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 2/26/2024 6:32:00 PM

Splendid Haiku, Jerry! I am enjoying a full moon here tonite casting its mellow glow on snow-covered Pikes Peak! Bob H

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/28/2024 6:28:00 PM

Thanks Bob. I think they called this one the snow moon.