Moon

The moon looks so perfect
the way it is in the night sky

It has a strange effect
The way the moon and the stars tie

They look flawless up there
It is so stunning

i wonder what it looks like here
Is it just the same or is it something not worth seeing

I believe nothing compares to the night
That not even an angel could

i dont know if i am right
but if i could know I would
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 30, 2009 at 4:17 PM
Yes, it would be spectacular to see the galaxy while sitting on the moon, Zach! Who knows, maybe someday it will be possible. The night sky is a great source of inspiration for this interesting poem. Love, Carolyn
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