Moon

waxing at her sidelong glance sun, fear of falling in love blushes hides and sets full enthroned blissfully on chariot of fair lambs in her bridal charm waning rubbing shoulders with the hard haughty hazy sky she grows weak and thin 19 July 2021

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Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 7/26/2021 11:45:00 PM

Beautiful images on Moon, lovely Haikus, and a well-deserved 'first place', congrats

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/26/2021 7:29:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/26/2021 9:52:00 AM

Beautiful images highlight different stages of the moon + sun + their impact. Congratulations! Brian

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/26/2021 5:40:00 AM

Back with congrats on your well deserved win.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/21/2021 6:43:00 PM

Ah, the 'white luna' is just going through a phase...

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/22/2021 2:45:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/21/2021 4:00:00 AM

WoW! lovely, creative and romantic write Thanks for brightening my Potd with your wonderful comments

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/21/2021 6:01:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/20/2021 5:01:00 PM

these too!! Gems

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/21/2021 6:02:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Garima Dubey

Date: 7/20/2021 1:02:00 PM

This was so romantic and lovely. I must say there is something really sensual about moon and romantic love.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/21/2021 6:02:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/20/2021 3:58:00 AM

I like the creativity of this one. Way to go. Right now it seems some days the sun is roasting that lamb at noon day. Thanks for your visit to my page with congrats. Sara

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/20/2021 4:28:00 AM

Thank you very much.