Christuraj Alex Poet Haiku

Moon

waxing

at her sidelong glance
sun, fear of falling in love
blushes hides and sets

full

enthroned blissfully
on chariot of fair lambs
in her bridal charm

waning

rubbing shoulders with
the hard haughty hazy sky
she grows weak and thin


19 July 2021

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Aniruddha Pathak July 26, 2021 at 11:45 PM Beautiful images on Moon, lovely Haikus, and a well-deserved 'first place', congrats

Kim Merryman July 26, 2021 at 7:29 PM Back to congratulate you on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Brian Sambourne July 26, 2021 at 9:52 AM Beautiful images highlight different stages of the moon + sun + their impact. Congratulations! Brian

Rama Balasubramanian July 26, 2021 at 5:40 AM Back with congrats on your well deserved win.

Gershon Wolf July 21, 2021 at 6:43 PM Ah, the 'white luna' is just going through a phase... Christuraj Alex July 22, 2021 at 2:45 AM Thank you very much.

Rama Balasubramanian July 21, 2021 at 4:00 AM WoW! lovely, creative and romantic write Thanks for brightening my Potd with your wonderful comments Christuraj Alex July 21, 2021 at 6:01 AM Thank you very much.

Andrea Dietrich July 20, 2021 at 5:01 PM these too!! Gems Christuraj Alex July 21, 2021 at 6:02 AM Thank you very much.

Garima Dubey July 20, 2021 at 1:02 PM This was so romantic and lovely. I must say there is something really sensual about moon and romantic love. Christuraj Alex July 21, 2021 at 6:02 AM Thank you very much.

Sara Kendrick July 20, 2021 at 3:58 AM I like the creativity of this one. Way to go. Right now it seems some days the sun is roasting that lamb at noon day. Thanks for your visit to my page with congrats. Sara Christuraj Alex July 20, 2021 at 4:28 AM Thank you very much.

Beata Agustin July 20, 2021 at 2:14 AM Wow! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start til the end. God bless you. Christuraj Alex July 20, 2021 at 4:28 AM Thank you very much.

Nancy Kaufman July 19, 2021 at 2:43 PM this is lovely and it was very clever how you incorporated the phases of the moon in to this touching piece. Christuraj Alex July 19, 2021 at 7:49 PM Thank you very much.

Kim Merryman July 19, 2021 at 1:29 PM Beautiful imagery in these haiku, Christuraj! Blessings, Kim M Christuraj Alex July 19, 2021 at 7:49 PM Thank you very much.