Mood Eyes

His eyes always change moods.
I like when his mood is me.
His eyes give him away.
Never subtle to my prying eyes.

Otherwise, they are fixed
upon the business at hand.
In my hands, his eyes rise.
We arise to suit our mood.

It is a moot fact, that we eye
one another in our birthday suits.
Pursuit of chestnutty eyes, over.
He’s done for. I’m over the moon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kendrick Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 10:16 AM
Passionate work penned. Way to go. Thank you for sharing. Sara K.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 2:34 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 2:10 AM
Wonderfully romantic. Great poetry.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 4:53 AM
Thanks, my dear friend! <3
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 12:44 AM
0ohlala!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 4:54 AM
Oh yeah…lol! Thank you, Bj!
Hind Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 9:13 PM
Woah... lol. Very sensuous, it's always good to play together, be cute together...
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 4:54 AM
Oui! Oui! Yes yes
Buehler Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 8:31 PM
This steamy, fun verse has delightful imagery! Lovely writing, Kim. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 4:55 AM
Thank you, Evelyn! Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 4:10 PM
Nice and sexy at the end there! I wonder if non natives understand what a birthday suit is!
Alhemaidy Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 8:34 AM
Totally naked!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 6:20 PM
Right?! LOL
Alhemaidy Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 3:42 PM
Very nice and interesting read!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 4:05 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Rodgers Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 8:18 AM
Dear Kim, such a playful charm in how you track his eyes through all their shifts, almost like they’re speaking before he does. I like the way the poem moves from observation to that mischievous ending, birthday suits, chestnut eyes, and then that clean leap to being “over the moon.” A nice mix of affection and humor. Blessings, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 4:05 PM
Thanks for a fun response! Hugs!
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