Monterey

 Written May 4, 2020

I can feel the sun beat down
O’er the sailors as they say
That we should have gone a different way
A compass if I may
Storms a brewin’ anyways

The horizon slowly fades
Silence grows as we slowly slip away
With an ocean between us
I never loved you more than Monterey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Breidenthal Avatar
December 6, 2022 at 12:55 PM
Adore this poem! You have created a gorgeous picture in so few words. Always, Laura
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2020 at 5:20 PM
I really loved that end line, so beautiful and saying so much in so few words!
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