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Monterey

Written May 4, 2020 I can feel the sun beat down O’er the sailors as they say That we should have gone a different way A compass if I may Storms a brewin’ anyways The horizon slowly fades Silence grows as we slowly slip away With an ocean between us I never loved you more than Monterey

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Date: 12/6/2022 12:55:00 PM
Adore this poem! You have created a gorgeous picture in so few words. Always, Laura
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Date: 5/29/2020 5:20:00 PM
I really loved that end line, so beautiful and saying so much in so few words!
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