Monster Under the Bed

I wrap my pillow tightly 
around my shivering head
To drown out the hiss and shuffle
 neath my rickety old bed
Whispers coming from the dark shadows
Speak my gloom and Impending doom
And the creaking floor echos wildly
 throughout this cold dark room
My breath mists like a ghostly apparition 
Ready to claim my battered soul
And my hearts beating like a  kettle 
boiling out of control.
My bodys now quaking like an earthquake
as all fears put a stranglehold on me. 
My brain says to run far away
 but im locked up in a deep deep freeze.
The sun blasts morning beams
 through my dusty window shades
The monster scurries far away
Until the dark returns then he comes back to play.

August 28/ 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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September 18, 2016 at 11:27 AM
I still believe in monster under my bed. ;) Carl, great way to express the dilemma that occurs in the night in the dark... Light is a gift,... However we want to see it... Enjoyed. Linda
Fraser Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 2:52 AM
I can remember this night of terror so well as a child. I believed it was absolutely real for a long time. Thankyou Linda for commenting. Blessings Carl
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August 28, 2016 at 6:07 PM
Love the dark atmosphere.
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August 28, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Certainly conveys mood and atmosphere, Carl...Rather quite creepy! My best regards. :) john
Fraser Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 5:01 PM
Thanks John. This was just a childhood memory i wrote about. Tried to capture the feel of it all. Thanks for stopping by. Carl
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