Monster In My Closet

A Monster in My Closet

There’s a monster in my closet
He’s looking right at me;
His eyes glow red – his teeth are green;
He’s as scary as can be.

There’s an ogre in the corner
I know for sure he’s there;
I can smell his breath from here
And see his slimy hair.

There’s a gremlin behind my chair,
Growling like a beast;
Slowly now he creeps toward me;
Someone stop him please!

There's a giant river troll
Underneath my bed;
Snorting, drooling, hiding there -
I think his name is Fred?!

There’s a creature on my ceiling
Hanging from one claw;
Waiting just to pounce on me
With his grimy paws.

There’s phantom at my desk
Silent as can be,
Hovering up in the air,
Giant as a big oak tree.

There’s a goblin at my window
Trying to get in;
Tapping on the windowpane;
I see his sneering grin.

My mother comes to check on me;
She sees my fear, my fright;
Sitting on my bed she says:
“Turn on the light!”
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Iversen  Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 8:06 PM
Feels like yesterday. Great write! Peter
Kauffman Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 12:56 AM
I know sometimes small things bring back these memories even as adults! Thanks Peter!
Blodgett Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 12:09 PM
Loved this...........reading it to my Grandkids this weekend!!! Lonna
Kauffman Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 11:53 PM
Thank you! Let me know if they like it.
Ibeh Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 8:47 AM
Brilliant stuff here, Sam;-) Loved it! Congrats on your win!
Kauffman Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 12:08 AM
Hi Edward! So glad you loved it. It is such a whimsical poem but seems to have touched a deep chord in our childhood. Thank you!
Barden Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 3:44 AM
This is a wonderful children's piece, Sam ... I was terrified of the dark as a child, but after my heart stopped three times (2005) and through poetry, it has become a place of beauty and refuge. Ironic how life transitions us sometimes. Loved it! :o)
Kauffman Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 12:52 AM
Thank you Gregory. I have come to love the quiet, the solitude, the sounds and scent of night although I have not, in any way, shape or form, come to this perception as you have. So glad you are still with us and writing poetry!
Somadas Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 11:26 PM
I like the way you create the suspense till the end.. Wonderful.. And the title is catching also.. Thanks for sharing..
Adams Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 7:59 PM
as a child my dad always had us watch vampire movies with him...i was afraid to fall asleep and always kept the covers over my neck just in case...if i watch a scary movie now as an adult i can't sleep... good write Sam... hugs
Devonshire Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 4:25 PM
:) Yes, things certainly look different in the light. I used to fear there was a monster beneath my bed, so I'd approach by running and leaping on it. Love the cadence and the humor, Sam! Best wishes, carolyn
Kauffman Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 11:27 PM
I have this picture of you as a child getting a running start and jumping into bed! Thank you for sharing your childhood. I do love the cadence of this poem - broken up occasionally by sentence like phrases. Sweet dreams! And thank you for your encouragement!
One Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 3:31 PM
i think many will be able to relate to this.. i used to hate watching horror movies when i was young.. i could never sleep.. i was even scared of jaws!!!
Kauffman Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 12:19 AM
After watching a particularly scary horror movie, I couldn't put my foot down in the dark at the side of the without a light for years. I am finding so many adults do relate to this poem. Thanks for the feedback.
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 2:29 PM
with funny monster illustrations
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 2:29 PM
what a delightful poem with a cute ending. I could see it in a children's book.
Kauffman Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 11:53 PM
I too see the illustrations. I did write this for children but have realized that it touches on a primal fear of the dark that many of us carry from childhood! Who knew?
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