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Monster In My Closet

A Monster in My Closet There’s a monster in my closet He’s looking right at me; His eyes glow red – his teeth are green; He’s as scary as can be. There’s an ogre in the corner I know for sure he’s there; I can smell his breath from here And see his slimy hair. There’s a gremlin right behind my chair, Growling like a beast; Slowly now he creeps toward me; Someone stop him please! There's a giant river troll Underneath my bed; Snorting, drooling, hiding there - I think his name is Fred?! There’s a creature on my ceiling Hanging from one claw; Waiting just to pounce on me With his grimy paws. There’s phantom at my desk Silent as can be, Hovering up in the air, Giant as a big oak tree. There’s a goblin at my window Trying to get in; Tapping on the windowpane; I see his sneering grin. My mother comes to check on me; She sees my fear, my fright; Sitting on my bed she says: “Turn on the light!”

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Date: 1/22/2020 8:06:00 PM
Feels like yesterday. Great write! Peter
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/23/2020 12:56:00 AM
I know sometimes small things bring back these memories even as adults! Thanks Peter!
Date: 1/21/2020 12:09:00 PM
Loved this...........reading it to my Grandkids this weekend!!! Lonna
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/21/2020 11:53:00 PM
Thank you! Let me know if they like it.
Date: 1/21/2020 8:47:00 AM
Brilliant stuff here, Sam;-) Loved it! Congrats on your win!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/22/2020 12:08:00 AM
Hi Edward! So glad you loved it. It is such a whimsical poem but seems to have touched a deep chord in our childhood. Thank you!
Date: 1/21/2020 3:44:00 AM
This is a wonderful children's piece, Sam ... I was terrified of the dark as a child, but after my heart stopped three times (2005) and through poetry, it has become a place of beauty and refuge. Ironic how life transitions us sometimes. Loved it! :o)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/23/2020 12:52:00 AM
Thank you Gregory. I have come to love the quiet, the solitude, the sounds and scent of night although I have not, in any way, shape or form, come to this perception as you have. So glad you are still with us and writing poetry!
Date: 1/20/2020 11:26:00 PM
I like the way you create the suspense till the end.. Wonderful.. And the title is catching also.. Thanks for sharing..
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Date: 1/20/2020 7:59:00 PM
as a child my dad always had us watch vampire movies with him...i was afraid to fall asleep and always kept the covers over my neck just in case...if i watch a scary movie now as an adult i can't sleep... good write Sam... hugs
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Date: 1/20/2020 4:25:00 PM
:) Yes, things certainly look different in the light. I used to fear there was a monster beneath my bed, so I'd approach by running and leaping on it. Love the cadence and the humor, Sam! Best wishes, carolyn
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/23/2020 11:27:00 PM
I have this picture of you as a child getting a running start and jumping into bed! Thank you for sharing your childhood. I do love the cadence of this poem - broken up occasionally by sentence like phrases. Sweet dreams! And thank you for your encouragement!
Date: 1/20/2020 3:31:00 PM
i think many will be able to relate to this.. i used to hate watching horror movies when i was young.. i could never sleep.. i was even scared of jaws!!!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/22/2020 12:19:00 AM
After watching a particularly scary horror movie, I couldn't put my foot down in the dark at the side of the without a light for years. I am finding so many adults do relate to this poem. Thanks for the feedback.
Date: 1/20/2020 2:29:00 PM
what a delightful poem with a cute ending. I could see it in a children's book.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/21/2020 11:53:00 PM
I too see the illustrations. I did write this for children but have realized that it touches on a primal fear of the dark that many of us carry from childhood! Who knew?
Date: 1/20/2020 2:29:00 PM
with funny monster illustrations
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